This is a really good story. It's quite a shame that you haven't updated it a very long time. If you have dropped this story, then its very sad because it was a very good story. It one of the best i have ever read on this site. Please update very soon!
Review By [vampiregoddess] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
I can't decide what I enjoyed the most about this chapter, the Doyle angst or the way Harry said his Da's grrr was better. I think you captured Allen perfectly. In my opinion he never seemed completely comfortable with his demon side in the series, and you showed that in this chapter. As much as I want Sirius to show, I'm glad he wasn't in this chapter. I liked the scene with Harry, Angel, and Allen. It enforced the fact that Angel and Harry are a family and that Allen and his wife are close family friends.
Anyways, thank you for updating this story. It had been so long I had almost given up hope. Please say another one is on the way soon.
Review By [nightseer] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elementary Mathematics" from vampiregoddess
Review:
i really like the story, you should continue this series of fanfics
Review By [vampiregoddess] • Date [22 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elementary Mathematics" from GothicPrincess
Review of chapter "Elementary Mathematics" from dulcinea
Review:
I think this is a really interesting way of bringing the to 'verses together, and I look forward to seeing where you take this. It'll be amusing to see which traits you keep as Harry's character and which you think were Dursley-derived. Also, I just wanted to say, good use of Whistler! He's one of my favorite cameo characters.
When you do update (which I hope you decide to do) can you please update as a chapter of this instead of as a new story- it saves confusion not having to go back and track prequels/sequels. Thanks!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. There will be more. I am looking forward to the challenge of deconstructing Harry to figure out what is his nature versus his lack of nurturing. Questions like that are one of the things I enjoy about 'what if' type stories.
This is actually meant to be a separate story from 'A Single Twist in Fate' which is why I entered it as an individual entry. I just forgot to add the note in the summary. I've corrected the mistake, and made a note to myself to remember this for future stories in the series.
Thanks again for the input.
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [10 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elementary Mathematics" from BrendanM
Review:
And the plot thickens...
Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [10 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elementary Mathematics" from RosytheCat
Review:
I absolutely love-love-LOVE this story so far, and its prequel. This has got to be *the* most origonal Angel/Harry Potter crossover AU ever, and you are pulling it off fabulously! Go team you!
Looking forward to next chapter,
Rosy the Cat
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have to say, it's a lot of fun writing this AU. I'm glad you enjoy it.
Review By [RosytheCat] • Date [10 Oct 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]