FABULOUS!!! WONDERFUL!!! STUPENDOUS!!!!! WE MUST HAVE MORE!!!!! I am so addicted to this series!! I can’t stop reading it!
Couple of edits tho... In the first part of Chapter 3, Xander says, “Kronos exploded a long time ago...” I believe that should be Kling??? And at the end of that same part he calls her, Thrall. Shouldn’t that be K’Thall???
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [2 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I can't believe it. No Twinkies? Xander hasn't figured out how to get the replicators to make Twinkies yet, or has he even tried? Great chapter in a great series. Thanks for the update. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [22 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Enter The Judy? Cool! Not sure if I reviewed this on Yahoo, but this one rocks, well, except for the part where Jab is in the clutches of Marshal the Murderous. I do hope she will be okay. More, soon, please.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [25 Oct 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Excellent start. Loved how - despite it being not really in his best interests relationshipwise - he handled Chakotay's (sp?) leaving. Sad to see that currently all romanitc possibilities for Xander seem to go down the drain, but then again it has to get better sometime :) Interesting and very bad at the same time is that Jacinta is in the vampires' hands, I wonder if something is going to happen that balances that out, cause at the moment is doesn't look good for the good guys.
Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
Review By [malaskor] • Date [23 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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