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Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
The very start of this story was a little weak, but by the end of the first 10 chapters, I was hooked because I was laughing so hard. As the story progressed, your writing improved greatly, but your humor was strong throughout the entire piece.

I loved all the little things you threw in: Anya calling herself Buffy; being misunderstood to be a vampire "slaver"; turning Dead Dave's into a trendy yuppy bar; freaking out over the bad man hurting the lovely money. But the coup de grace has to be Anya's evil bunny costume! I nearly busted my gut when that was revealed!

Thanks for a brilliant story.

I almost hate to mention this, after heaping all this praise on you, but in this latest chapter, you called "Musette" by the name of "Margeurite" again.
Comments from author:
Thanks very much for review - actually was very constructive esp about weakness in first part. And Musette/maguerite... damn these name changing vamps.

Glad you story - and yep will do a an eilogue soonish March maybe
xx
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No pain No Gain" from mfung
Review:
Love kickass Anya!! Wonder what Asher reaction is going to be. Definitely need some closure and confrontation with those two. Yay for more chapters!!
Comments from author:
thankx
Review By [mfung] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from Arekanderu
Review:
One request here Yey more!.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from toowhiteprincess
Review:
Asher is never going to leave the bedroom with Anya around. Good job.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from Dragonpink
Review:
Wow Anya so rocks... who else could kick such a*s dressed like a bunny and look so good doing it!!! =^.^=
Review By [Dragonpink] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from stonegolem
Review:
That's great. I was wondering when she would go all demony. The reactions were awesome. An epilogue telling some of the fallout would be appreciated.
Comments from author:
I will try - promise

thanx for review it makes it all worth whilke
Review By [stonegolem] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from ophite
Review:
Thank you for taking me on this ride, it was a hoot. You did a lovely job with Anya in this story.
Review By [ophite] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from CousinMary
Review:
Please, please, please more! At least a little epilouge. Great work as always :)
Comments from author:
ok ok ok ... sometime soon.

thanks Counsin mar - means a lot from you
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from TarnishedGold
Review:
I love the traveller, you have certainly done him justice. I enjoyed this story, though I think there should be some kind of epilogue. It's missing the wrap up at the end.
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from chajalive
Review:
sex poodle. how did you think this one up?
Greatly enjoyed this chapter.
Chaja
Comments from author:
I had an anya moment
Review By [chajalive] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 22... and the fat lady sings" from Grindhall
Review:
Yaa! Update, I most certainly do want to read more of this. Its great to see Anya doing her thing and you write her damn well.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 22 Flight or fight" from Grindhall
Review:
Damn good stuff swinging between drama, romance and humor like Anya herself!

Great chapter the bunny suit was pure win!

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 22 Flight or fight" from anyanka
Review:
I'm so glad to see another chapter! I'd love more. Thanks for the update!
Review By [anyanka] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 22 Flight or fight" from Specks
Review:
omg! That was perfect beyond words. Beyond words! Anya's costume makes such wonderful absolute sense. Plus, you are the master of suspense. I'm right on the edge of my seat. Wonderful wonderful chapter.
Review By [Specks] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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