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Review of chapter "CH 14 Promises" from NumberFive
Review:
fantastic, and an update! at last!
Comments from author:
Thanks trying to update more frequently... damn real life!
Review By [NumberFive] • Date [14 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH 14 Promises" from Valkyrie
Review:
I like this. It made me laugh.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [13 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH 14 Promises" from darren
Review:
Good stuff! Don't give up on this - you've got the makings of a really good story here. Too may Anita crossovers focus on the dominant characters of Buffy or Willow, so it's good to see the focus on the less noticed but just as interesting character of Anya.

I may be wrong, but I feel you may be missing a deeper storyline (based on what I've read so far). Do you have an end point (even 100,000 words away) in sight? I always find that once you have a beginning, a plot outline, and an end point, filling in the rest is just time, creative effort, and sweat and tears.

Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Ohhh thanks sooo much... been patiently (or not) logging on to see the reaction to this.

Yep definately have the whole plot in my head. I never start a story unless I have it pretty much fantasised out, ther rest is sometimes rejigging the characters around who goes with who etc etc. Hard part is trying to get it down on paper. I want to finsih this one cos so many other ideas kicking around. Thanks again Darren. X
Review By [darren] • Date [13 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 13 Confusion" from CousinMary
Review:
Oh please, oh please, oh please update this fic! It's been one of my absolute favorites forever and I'm in physcial pain whenever I think of it and it's non finished status! Not that I'm advocating quiting your job and leaving your husband... but really, if that's what it takes to finish this most wonderful of fics... ;-)

Anyway, again, SUCH a funny, sweet, awesome fic, please, please, please continue soon!
Comments from author:
gosh... will try to live up to your expectations.. (PS still looking for a husband)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 13 Confusion" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Cool chapter, are you planning to continue it?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [14 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 13 Confusion" from FicChick
Review:
Funny story, please keep writing.
Review By [FicChick] • Date [29 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 13 Confusion" from (Past Donor)merlyna
Review:
I hope you update and continue this story, it is alot of fun! :)
Review By [(Past Donor)merlyna] • Date [4 Aug 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 13 Confusion" from korilian
Review:
Don't worry about the 'blah blah chapter' thing. It ads plot and action is always boring without one of those. Love the storie.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [korilian] • Date [15 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No pain No Gain" from sixtailz
Review:
I would love to see everyone's reaction to Anya's fear of bunnies
Comments from author:
Ah ha ... Maybe this will be a wish granted ... you will have to wait and see!
Review By [sixtailz] • Date [15 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of story "No Pain... No Gain..." from Darklight
Review:
new part posted and another so fast after wards, same chapters only diff a "n" in the title of the chapter.

so An getting audience with JC, what could go wrong, I think JC is going to do something dumb, attacking or threatening Anya isn't that bad, at least to Anya. But accusing her of stealing money, that'll get her blood boiling.

Still routing for harmony to be the one to also end up there with Anya.

Keep the chapters coming and get some Buffeemonster time for Anya
Comments from author:
Didnt quite understand this until somebody else pointed it out too, How dumb am I!!!

Thanks again.. may have to do some serious vamp bashing to make it up to you!
Review By [Darklight] • Date [14 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Ch 12 Hic" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Either Asher is going to love his gift or he's going to curse JC for it. I don't think JC can break Anya. He's going to break his teeth on her.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [11 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 12 Hic" from Windvein
Review:
Hi, I was one of the deleted reviewers. Caught up with your story, and think it's still going very well. The humor is great. Grammar/punctuation is still a little rough, but the content is top notch. I'm sorta dreading the meeting with Anita. If you can keep them from meeting, I think I'd love you. Anita has become my least favorite character of the Anitaverse.

I second that suggestion of Anya introducing herself by her formal name/title. I can imagine everyone of the men in the Anitaverse dropping a brick at this revelation.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Windvein] • Date [11 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 12 Hic" from Weaver
Review:
I knew it was only a matter of time before someone in a crossover fic made fun of JC's clothes, and Anya queen of blunt did it better then almost anyone else could have. Can't wait for the vamps' reactions when they twig that Anya=Buffee monster. Out of curiosity, why did you have Anya use Buffy's name?
Comments from author:
Hi, thanks yep I had a hard trouble making this chapter flow, so I am glad you like it as I wasnt sure whether the clothes thing worked.

as to why Anya chose Buffy's name well I reckon its a complex reason - she couldn't really use her name Anayanka to similar to Anya and she still wants to remain unknown. Also shes a bit jealous of Buffy, Buffy does go after vampires and is the scariest person she knows... and well perhaps it was the first thing she could think of. Anya was always good at putting the blame on somebody else. Remember the scene in Buffy "what Willow's an ex Demon" when the council comes calling.
Review By [Weaver] • Date [11 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 12 Hic" from Zith
Review:
I like your story so far, very Anya-like. I wanna see how she reacts to the notion of being broken, or what will happen if they catch an Anya in the Bufee trap. Write more soon please!
Comments from author:
Getting warm!
Review By [Zith] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 12 Hic" from Darklight
Review:
Great chapter, can't wait to see Anya take JC appart (no killing) after he accusing her embezzling and stealing from the bar and from her work. She already stole money as Buffeemonster, but that doesn't count.

Get Anya at least to level one of JC's buildings/enterprises for his transgression accusing her of stealing money, how could he say a thing like that, I don't think Anya is going to stay calm when they accuse her or she learns about it, an angry Anya isn't a pretty sight, worse than the Buffeemonster they are hunting.

Get Anya to do some of her nightly activities again and rob vamps again and maybe start her protection scheme getting victims pay for their rescue from weres and vamps and other bad things
Comments from author:
Thanks for review... yep wondering what to do next with her I know whats happening at the end its a pretty explosive action ending but still wondering whether to start going for some softer Anya moments or some Kick ass action. I think you are a kick ass person - so we will see.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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