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Review of chapter "Three Really is Company" from Cutiepie
Review:
Well, I read the other reviews you've gotten before writing this one. And I find that I have not much at all to say that would be new. We've got the 'I like the way you are changing things' and the 'I like the new background info you are giving.' There's also the 'glad that Angel and Faith will now have a family of sorts.' I only wonder how the heck Angel is able to go to Disneyland. He should be a crispy ash-burger by now. There's not much in the way of shade on the way up to the ticket booths there. And then he would have to survive the park itself. So, I'd like some explination, or else just tell me (and everyone else) to suspend all disbelief. =]
Comments from author:
It's summer, they show up around 6 or 7, its stay open 'til midnight, I was actually there in July 1995 and going clockwise toward the Pirates of the Carribean and that way, there' actually shade. As to just outside the park...just work with me on that...cheap umbrella, hat, collar up...a single *really* dark cloud placed here so the PTB could have Whistler talk to him...
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [7 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Really is Company" from Zira
Review:
I realy like this. Carry on by all means!
Review By [Zira] • Date [6 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Really is Company" from Rivana
Review:
Hey you.. this is coming along great. So someone zigged when they should have zagged huh. Makes a nice story. :-) Two edged sword that deal of Angel's, but interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [Rivana] • Date [6 Nov 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Really is Company" from Caliadragon
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I look forward to seeing what other changes this world has wrought. I love the way that you have given Angel and Faith a family in Xander. Thanks and more soon I hope.


Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [5 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two Plus Two Equals Five By Five" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! So that is how your "Faith" got her name. Your alternate universe is very clever and I am enjoying your story. Please keep writing.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Change in Regimen" from Zira
Review:
I love it. The background information is a very good inclusion, as most authors just assume that their readers automatically know the character's past, even if it differs from the actual canon past. Loadsa love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [4 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Change in Regimen" from Rivana
Review:
Vey interesting start. I like this new angle, can't wait to see what happens once they reach Sunnyhell. Using Ethan as a surrogate father seems to be a somewhat popular thing and I love the possibilities that it can entail. Introducing Angel allready is very promising, will be interesting to see how this affects life on the Hellmouth. Keep writing this one, please. The concept is somewhat novel and that's always good. C ya around!!
Review By [Rivana] • Date [4 Nov 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Change in Regimen" from tohonomike
Review:
Thanks for the feedback everybody. This was a set up background, and once we get to Welcome to the Hell Mouth it will become more 'episodic' in nature. I gave in to the sudden need to write this and after a quick re-check published it before I became too caught up in trying to make it 'perfect.' I hope all of you enjoy this. And please keep reviewing!
Review By [tohonomike] • Date [3 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Change in Regimen" from VillageOrchid
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A nicely done AU set up that makes Xander more informed, better able to protect himself and others and possibly a better sense of self-esteem. Nice fit in with the charmed universe, and pretty good job at not making Xander too powerful. Looking forward to some extended scenes featuring demonstrations of characterization, though. Good general establish of Ethan's personality in this universe. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Change in Regimen" from Caliadragon
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Yet another interesting fic. I love the idea of stealing Buffy and hijacking Angel so early into things.

Thanks

calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [3 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Change in Regimen" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Quite an interesting beginning! I love Xander-centric stuff. Please add more soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [3 Nov 04] • Not Rated
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