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Review of chapter "Quo Vadis" from netty
Review:
I loved your story. It was it was a good storyline and well thought out plot. I do have one issue. Overall, you did a good job portraying a Marine but it's almost impossible to make Gunny before 11 or 12 years and no Gunny would ever be taken to being referred to a a Sergeant well. Even by a General. Army and Air Force you could get away with it, But not the Marines.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

Hey some people have Xander as a full Colonel at the age he is in these stories! I needed him to be in charge of a team, and hell, the cannon SG-1 was commanded by a Lt Colonel in his fourties. Since when did anyone that age and/or rank get risked carrying a rife at the sharp end?

I'm aware he's young to be a gunnery sergeant, but I only found that out after posting the part 1 of the origingal Dual Employment (I live at the other end of the planet and have never met a Marine, US or other) where I had him referred to as 'Gunny' repeatedly. Foreign postings is a set of back stories trying to explain how he got promoted so fast.
Review By [netty] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quo Vadis" from Regress
Review:
You did a phenomenal job of this fanfic, I'm looking forward to reading the quasi-sequel: Foreign Posting. It would be great to read more in the same vein as this story, and the way you avoid getting bogged down in details makes it a nice light read.
Review By [Regress] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quo Vadis" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quo Vadis" from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
I loved this story. A nice self-contained story arc, however I'm wondering how Xander got posted to the SGC at such a you age.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [20 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quo Vadis" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh shoot! I really hope this isn't the end of your wonderful series. I haven't been able to read a chapter of this insanity of yours without having to stop and get my laughing under control. This whole series was so logical and yet so warped I loved each and every update. Thank you for the ribtickling fun.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quo Vadis" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Interesting ending. Maybe I missed something in the last chapter, but making the Goa'uld extinct would wipe out the Jaffa. They're dependent on them. Even Tretonin is ground Goa'uld, so while they might have enough to temporarily make more tretonin no more Gou'ald means they would likely run out before they could find a way to permanently fix the problem.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [12 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consequences of previous actions" from banner
Review:
Wonderful beginning. More, please?
Review By [banner] • Date [2 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consequences of previous actions" from CPTSkip
Review:
I love this series. This series makes me laugh. A lot. Please write more to this series. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dual Employment" from WEMB
Review:
Interesting take on things and defintely has included a few laughs. Hope to see more. Please.:)
Review By [WEMB] • Date [12 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Consequences of previous actions" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I think Buffy would have security clearance after the Initiative.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [12 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consequences of previous actions" from Kronos
Review:
Cool story. Interesting plot choice, interactions between characters are very good and overall funny with a hint of drama. Also loved the whole Faith slamming into Xander analogy.
Review By [Kronos] • Date [12 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Consequences of previous actions" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Very amusing and I like how things work with your version of Xander. Nice to see a Xander-fic that doesn't do any real buffy-bashing - even though she's apparently a minor character here it's nice that she gets some funny bits also.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [12 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thumbs up to an interesting choice for continuing this tale. I'm enjoying the problem-solving in the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I like the way this is going! I'm glad you decided to continue it. Please write more soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [30 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Caliadragon
Review:
Very interesting chapter. I look forward to seeing Xander and Faith interact.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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