Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

I loved this chapter. I am definitely a fluff person, so this was a great chapter to me. I love Xander's relationships with the people of the Tenshiverse and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

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Calia

I can't believe that Faith is gone. I'll really miss her, but I loved the way that you ended this chapter. Anger managment classes! LOL! I love it.

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Oh my Goddess! That was a horrible place to end it! I loved this chapter and I'm glad to see that Joyce is getting help. Now I want to know who died so more soon PLEASE?


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I love this chapter! I like the way that you had Xander stand up to and dismiss Buffy's idea that he stay. I love the way that you introduced Dawn as well.

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This was a wonderful chapter and I loved the interaction between Buffy and Lady Tsunami.

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This chapter was brilliant. I loved the way that you had Faith and Xander work through the pain of her killing the DM. Though Buffy's attitude is really beginning to piss me off. She needs a really good ass kicking.

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These last two chapters were brilliant and it always pissed me off that Buffy never took responsibility for her part in the D.M.'s death.




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I had a thought........

Dawn+Juraian Marriage=TOTAL RIOT!!!

I am finding that I very much enjoy this story. Keep it up, I await further chapters.

ohhhh booooy....Water of Life....

Xander is going to live quite a bit more....

And what if Tsunami is finding a way to power the Chozo Armor?

This was an excellent chapter. I loved the way that you are introducing the characters and working through the paina dn rage between them.

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Cool!

I really wasn't expecting Mihoshi to come in, but it was a good twist!

I got quite a few chuckles out of this one A.R.! Wonderful work that i hope will keep coming. Please dont fault the lack of grammar and punctuation, i currently have an extraordinarily stiff right wrist which is highly painful to type with.

Anyway, as always, i enjoy your stories, especially this one, and a few other i cant think of at the moment(possibly awaken the inu if i got the id right lol ).

Keep up the good work, and dont rush it, or it will come out poorly worded.

Tremerid.

Trust me, I'm not one to judge on spelling or grammar - if it weren't for Spell and Grammar check, I'd probably be laughed off of the 'net.

This was an excellent chapter and I look forward to reading more in this universe.

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calia