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Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Very nice story. I was really enjoying it ... until the end of chapter 7... Then you left me hanging with a limmerick on the wall of Drusilla's HQ and an epilogue that puts everyone back in Sunnydale... What happened in St. Louis? What happened to Drusilla? What happened to the rest of the story?
Comments from author:
Yeah I know it was was an abrupt ending; but this is Xander retelling the story to an unconscious Faith. Of course he won't tell her everything. He never tells anyone everything. I am working on a sequel but until I get it almost finished I won't be posting it. The problem right now is that I've hit a mental roadblock and haven't been able to write anything for months.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from AnimeRonin
Review:
So, is there any more to this? Will you be doing a sequel? *hint, hint*.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from cjdunk
Review:
Oh, hell no. You can't leave the story there. More now.
Review By [cjdunk] • Date [30 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from AnimeRonin
Review:
Is there any more of this? I hope so, I like it a lot, particularly with the way things are going right now with his new pack and Faith's possible inclusion.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Telmah
Review:
Great story, but a rather abrupt ending. Did you just decide to drop it? Or do you have a sequal planned and this was just an extended prologue? I do hope you continue the story.
Telmah
Review By [Telmah] • Date [27 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from Tjin
Review:
neat.

i hope to see more of this.

i don't really read Anita Blake stories but this ones caught my attention
Review By [Tjin] • Date [11 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from debio
Review:
Awwwwwwwww!!!! It's over? There should be a sequel.?? Please? .... Pretty Please???
Review By [debio] • Date [30 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Rather fast departure from St. Louis, I would say. But never mind. ;-)
Nice verse at the end of chapter 7. :-)

I *really* look forward what will happen now with Faith and Xander and his girls. Please, please, please write a sequel for this story!
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [13 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
While I think that you chickened out at the end (I would have liked to see Xander bitch-slap Narcissus and whip the were-hyenas into some form of self respect), it was a very interesting story premise in that Xander's possession had turned him into an alpha hyena shifter. Another opportunity you missed is that Xander was in St. Louis and never ran across Anita, Richard or Jean-Claude. I'm sorry, but my read of Narcissus is that he would have immediately run to Anita or Jean-Claude to report a "strong Alpha" in his territory that was looking to make trouble (to protect his own interests and get Anita to do his dirty work for him). Anita, of course, would have run off half-cocked without getting the full story and Xander would have responded to Anita like he does to Buffy with his patented "I'm a harmless goof" routine. This would confuse Anita and could lead to all sort of interesting situations. I like that Xander was able to keep his secret from the gang for two years because even in canon Xander has secrets that no one knows (even Willow his supposed best friend from kindergarten). I also like the set up you gave at the end for a very interesting interaction between Xander's new pack and Faith (and who knows maybe the old pack too if Xander finds them). So, strong opening but weak ending, and I'm looking forward to the new story that is hinted at in the closing.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [13 Nov 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: He’s Waiting and She’s Back" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh, but this is a lovely story. I hope there will be more, but what you have written is pretty darn good. I like the fact you've written an Anitaverse crossover story with no Anita. I would love to see what happens when Faith wakes up. I'm not too sure how she will react to Alex's harem. And I think it would be loads of laughs for Anita or Edward to show up in Sunnydale. I thank you for a nice Xander story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Beauties and A New Family" from Ladeia
Review:
Can't wait for more of this fic. Lol.. Xan waking up with 5 naked ladies... hehe.. Hurry back with more.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [28 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Beauties and A New Family" from Tjin
Review:
A great story, i'm not an A. Blake fan of any means but this one cuaght my attention.

if many more stories are like this i may change my mind.

Keep up the good work and post more soon.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [8 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Beauties and A New Family" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
A very interesting and believable twist on the Hyena Possession story line. Also a good melding of the Buffyverse with the Anitaverse. I especially like how Xander (true to form) has surrounded himself with females once again and set himself up as the protector. I look forward to seeing what you do with Xander's new pack and how they will play into the were politics of St. Louis.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [15 Jul 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Beauties and A New Family" from Alltorian
Review:
Excellent chapter. Love how you basically gave big X a harem LOL. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [30 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Beauties and A New Family" from Thewander
Review:
great, More more.


Please...
Review By [Thewander] • Date [30 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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