Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Trouble Follows Me Wherever I Go" from Darklight
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nice start, can't wait to see how Xander will get in trouble there.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Trouble Follows Me Wherever I Go" from yakuit
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interesting start.....cant wait for whats going to happen in St Louis hope there is lots of vamp action
Review By [yakuit] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Trouble Follows Me Wherever I Go" from Mashell
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This fic is awesome! I can barely wait till you post the next chapter. I like how describe Xander's travel. Not so envolved you're wishing the writer would hurry up and get to the good stuff, and not so glossy that you have no clue where he stopped or who he met. I like how you added in the girls he rescued it clued readers into the fact that Xander hasn't changed to majorly and he's still our lovable white hat. Also great descriptions of the land and the area you made it very believable. For pairing truthfully I'd prefer slash just becaue all the women in Anita verse aren't nearly as cool as the men, but then again no paring works well too. Just please don't pair him with Slyvie she has Gwen or Cherry she has Zane. If you pair him with Narcissus I think I'll run for the hills. Can we say Ick much? Great fic Can't wait for more- Mashell
Review By [Mashell] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Trouble Follows Me Wherever I Go" from Caliadragon
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I look forward to seeing how the Werehyena's of St.Louis respond to Xander.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [7 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Trouble Follows Me Wherever I Go" from superbrutal
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As long as it not a slash, please continue!
Sorry, I've seen too many Anita Blake stories where they've used a slash with Xander.
Hell if you use no pairing at all that would also be great.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [7 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hyena's Sure Cause Trouble" from ghostworks
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Interesting, very interesting...I like how you explained the awareness of the preternatural of the Anita-verse vs the blindness of Sunnydale. One question though, why didn't Buffy notice anything after she returned from LA? Other than that - excellent. Ilook forward to the next chapter.
Review By [ghostworks] • Date [27 Dec 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hyena's Sure Cause Trouble" from Thewander
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very good , hope more soon
Review By [Thewander] • Date [27 Dec 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hyena's Sure Cause Trouble" from cwolf
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Scratches head. I thought the shapechangers in Anita Blake changed at will... anyhow, I like it
Review By [cwolf] • Date [26 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hyena's Sure Cause Trouble" from Jinni
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