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A Murderer's Daughter

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Review of story "A Murderer's Daughter" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is a really neat idea, I like where you're going with the story. I think you've got good technique. However, i do think you're not creating an atmosphere for your story. I don't mean list off the scenery or what the characters are wearing but just guide the reader towards your vision of what is going on visually in the scene. Please keep writing this. I enjoy it and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Mar 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Murderer's Daughter" from Anonymous Reviewer
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::blinkity blink::
Somehow, a part of me was expecting that...
But the larger, more clueless part of me was shocked as Hades...:)
Definitely looking forward to THAT explanation...And...::shudder:: At least tell me Joyce Summers wasn't...involved...with Moldy Voldy...Please?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [18 Mar 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Murderer's Daughter" from Anonymous Reviewer
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::blinkity-blink::
Brownie points to you for originality...
::pause::
This is a damned original fic, I have to hand it to you...
SO WRITE MORE, DAMNIT!!! This might actually be one of the few fics where I'd like Buffy...
::shudder:: Not another one...
:)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [16 Mar 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "A Murderer's Daughter" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Really hope you continue this soon. Love to see more.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [16 Mar 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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