okay, interesting plottwist. Although I find the idea of Woodd purposely sending slayers (like his mum) to their death to annoy another guy extremely crual and pretty weird.
But that you had the slayers with Xander was a surprising plottwist. Though' with all those research sessions I'd have thought he;d have picked a more male God, maybe something viking to honor Anya(Aud). But i suppose you have a reason for that we'll discover in the coming chapters :-)
Interesting story so far. Gaia seems for me to be a tok'ra, as she don't kill the soldiers and Xander has still a voice in the background. But maybe she only does so as show for the slayers, as they would be against killing and this would reject them. *evilgrin* But after one year in a Goauld I don't think Xander would still able or willing to say something and would also not be adressed by his name. So tok'ra it is!!! *biggrin* I look forward how this will develop! :-)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [28 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh please more!!! I really like this fic. I love the idea of Xander being taken by.... wait is it Tok'ra or Goa'uld? Anyways I have no clue why he would want the mini slayers but I guess he would need warriors if he's expecting the gate to be heavily gaurded. I mean that is what he is looking for right? Alrighty then I have to get out of here so good luck with this fic. I really can't wait till you update and longer chapters would be nice but I won't complain as long as you update. :-) - Mashell
Review By [Mashell] • Date [28 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow... cool concept, though I question the Wood as Quentin Travers thing... while it may be interesting in the short run, I highly doubt they would leave someone that unknown to them in the position you have him in, especially with Giles available. Also, with the kind of body count you are suggesting, Buffy would have gotten involved in the situation you've described very quickly. This sounds more like a Wood possessed by Travers situation, which would be rather interesting, and allow for the redemption of this character at a later date.
Comments from author:
They reason wood took over was the rest of the Scoobies were just plain tired of every thing. Just took the easy way out. Giles would make a great leader, but he has a habit of taking off. Look at the show, When Buffy really need a Father around to help her Off he when to england. As for the Body cound, (MY) verson of Wood, never like him anyway, Kept it all hidden, By moving people around. so no one really noticed that people were getting killed in large numbers.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [28 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
