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Review of chapter "Out of Africa" from IrisOwens
Review:
This is a good start and I'd like to see more. Will this just be Xander interacting with the characters from Stargate? Or will the Scoobies also get involved? I wouldn't mind seeing some of the Scoobies appear. At the very least, Xander should talk to the Scoobies to wrap things up. I hope Wood does get a beat down from Xander.
Review By [IrisOwens] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Out of Africa" from Caliadragon
Review:
I really look forward to seeing what happens next, though I do hope that Xander has not been possessed by a bad guy.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Out of Africa" from DeeRose
Review:
Interesting set up. So what happens next? --- I never read the first posting, but this one read well, so I'm guessing the mistakes have been taken care of.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Out of Africa" from CrystalOGrapher
Review:
I like the setup. I look forward to more installments, but I'd enjoy them more if you'd find an additional proofreader (also known as a beta-reader or beta-checker). There are enough problems with punctuation and capitalization to be distracting, and the style/wording is awkward in spots. If you are, as I suspect, a German writing in English, I think you are doing a very good job, but it's not quite perfect; I'm American, but I read enough German to recognize the characteristic style. Tschuess.
Review By [CrystalOGrapher] • Date [8 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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