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Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from arkeus
Review:
Another very good chapter.

And Willow action!!!

kinda sad that Willow isn't uber, and that she has no contact with her old friends though :/

Great work so far, though sometimes i am a bit ocnfuseed by the interchanging universes.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Sorry that Willow wasn't uber. I sometimes feel that authors make the characters a little too uber, so I unfortunately sometimes do the opposite. However, the rest of the chapter will follow her, and you will get to see her in some type of action throughout the rest of the chapter, first techie wise and then power wise. It's just taking a while to get there.

Sorry also for any confusion from universe to universe. I try to mark them to help with that. I'm open to any suggestions you might have to improve upon this method.


Jes
Review By [arkeus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7c" from Traveler
Review:
I'm bad, I just got around to reading this very entertaining story. Two of my favorite worlds,doubled-a sure formula for happiness. Thank you for sharing this with your readers and now as its 5 months into 2007 I hope you will be able to update soon. I am tracking so I will not miss it.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7c" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Sorry it's taken me so long to review, but Christmas was kind of overwhelming this year, and your chapters are so dense (in a good way!), that I need to give them my full attention when I read them. Thanks for the preview of "coming attractions" with Fred and the Burkles, and for the insights into Elizabeth Weir's first dealings with Daniel and Jack. (Also, the lovin' between Rodney and John was so endearing!). Can't wait to see what comes next!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7c" from purrfus
Review:
What a wonderful mix. Keeping both universes going with the similar characters and yet keeping to a unique feel is sometimes confusing to read, and must be hard to write, but you are doing a great job with this.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7c" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seven B" from RevDorothyL
Review:
One more thing for me to be thankful for this Thanksgiving: a new chapter of "Oh, For Cryin' Out Loud"! And a good one, too (Charity!Jackson makes a delightful addition to that wonderful, funny, moving conversation in Jack's living room -- I especially love the way Jack and Teal'c seem to be vying for her fannish loyalties!).

Thanks for not giving up on this story, in spite of the moving and other difficulties this year.
Comments from author:
:) I'm glad I gave you one more thing to be thankful for. I was worried that everyone was going to give up on me, being it took so long. However, it is nice seeing a familiar name when it comes to my reviews. I read your last review and was blown away. However, if I remember correctly, I read it at work and didn't have time to reply. Then my brain disconnected somewhere between work and home!!!

Thank you so much for both reviews. It is nice to have such glowing reviews and really makes me want to write. I am trying hard to keep on going and promise that there will be more Charity Jackson in the future! Thanks again and happy Thanksgiving!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seven B" from Gaeriel
Review:
I just read this through all and loved it. I was a bit wary at first because I'm not that familiar with Stargate but am really glad I gave this a try. Thanks and hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I can understand about not wanting to read fic where you don't know about the show. I'm glad you stuck with it though, and hoped that the characters weren't too hard to follow. Stargate is a great show that I will sorely miss come June (it's ending after 10 seasons).

Jes
Review By [Gaeriel] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seven B" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. You have reviewed every chapter so far, and it is nice knowing that you are sticking with me on this fic. As for the next chapter, Stacia is working on the editing right now. Hopefully it will be up quickly. As for the one after that... I'm still in progress on that one.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seven B" from purrfus
Review:
Initially I was attracted to this story by the summary; as much as I like stories which focus on the main characters, I have a great deal of curiosity about all of the series minor ones and like to hear about them. Various relationships between the universes and the characters has been great to read.
Comments from author:
Wow! Usually I hear the opposite from people when it comes to the summary. I've actually thought of changing it, but have never got around to doing so. I'm happy that it did catch your eye in the end. Thanks for you comment on the various relationships, as there are several in the story. There is a lot to write on them, and it is nice knowing people are enjoying the read.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7a" from arkeus
Review:
Yay, just finished reading it, and it is quite good :-)
Everything is moving on, and as i didn't watch those episodes, i have no idea what will happen.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
Very, very good, though i am more interested in world one than world two... good work.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [24 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7a" from RevDorothyL
Review:
As I've said elsewhere, at greater length, this is a great story with two (count 'em, TWO) universes full of wonderfully weird minglings of BtVS and SG1 characters and mythologies (plus a refugee Dr. Cameron from "House"!). Thanks for not giving up on this, and for not being afraid to explore ALL the possibilities in one universe or another (including a charmingly plausible version of Shepherd/McKay, which I'd never considered reading before).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7a" from TorturedAngel
Review:
wow just wow. i'm a new reviewer, took me 3 days to read all 8parts but wow. I definitly look forward to more and want to say that this is a really good buffy/angel stargate crossover!
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [21 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7a" from war
Review:
John with the the Ancients knowledge in his head thats scary.nice goodbye scene between Tara and Willow.Glad to see Faith decide to go with Graham.good story looking forward to your next chapter when you get time for it.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6B" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
I hesitated to read this since the main characters were not my favorite. Luckily I decided to check it out anyway. It is a great story that really captures the feel of both shows. The characters seem to be just as I would imagine them in the various shows. Overall a great story. Definitely worth reading.
Comments from author:
Thank you Saturn, and I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to this. You are not the first person who questioned if they should read this due to the main characters. Maybe I should redo my summary. I wrote it before I realized how large a storyline I was actually working on here.

Thanks also for your comment on my character writing. I always fear that I'm writing someone wrong. Luckily, in this story, many of them are AU. I can make them opposite of what they are like on the show.

Thanks again, and I always enjoy receiving a review from someone new!

Jes
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [24 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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