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Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I just found this and I'm enjoying it...tho it is moving very slowly.

More Please!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Wow!! I just read this whole story and it is really really good! I hope you can update soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [22 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from gigi
Review:
Please come back to this story. It's very good. It deserves to be finished.
Comments from author:
I'll try
Review By [gigi] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from DreamOfStories
Review:
Please update soon. It's a good story even if it is moving slowler than most of the ones I like... and consdiering that, I'd rahter a chapter wher eit moves slwoly than none at all. Please?

If your stuck on ideas, how about a scene where Umbridge tries to question her, and the trio just 'happen' to be going past and stop to listen. Unbridge could try to use veritserum and Buffy being the Slayer would be immune and doesn't get why she's asking all these probing questions. Umbridge would get annoyed and demand something that is blatent spying. (I'm thinking something like 'Tell me something that I coudl use against Dumbeldore') Then Buffy would get all offended and use Cordy's lessons on sarcasm to great effect.

Or you could have the meeting with Remus again, and he asks hwo she is doing and she is upset with him. And maybe he asks her about if she has any idea about her power yet... fireworks there. Possible accusations about trust issues, and the accusation that Dumbledore tried to read her mind comes out. Being from her point of view you'd miss the reactions of Remus to that statement when she storms out...

Come on! Give us something!

PLEASE!
Comments from author:
Thanks, its nice that the story's enjoyable despite the slow pace. To be honest for me its the other way around that tends to annoy me - no doubt the reason I write as I do.

nice ideas =D I kinda know where this is going, it's just getting the inspiration/motivation to write specific scenes that I seem to lack recently.
Review By [DreamOfStories] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from justapiranha
Review:
Is there another chapter comming anytime soon?
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from ganainm
Review:
I've enjoyed this story and I look forward to more.
Review By [ganainm] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from (Past Donor)kaliGofD
Review:
excellent story

I hope u have a big confrontation between Buffy & hermione cause that girl neds a big dressing down, will the fact that buffy has been aleinated from staff & pupils cause her any probs in the future

I would love to see buffy giving dumbledore n snape a reprimand for invading her mind cause that be cool

love the whole mistrust breeds mistrust & hope u play more on that in future updates

great story love the way u have the trio as background characters & not central at the mo

Hope we find out about her parents and the necklace soon

update soon
Comments from author:
She will get to the point of shouting at some point, however remember it's slightly hypocrytical of her to be so annoyed at their distrust, she hasn't exactly been forthcoming either ;P

I'm glad you've been enjoying it.
Review By [(Past Donor)kaliGofD] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from coley
Review:
This is an awesome story!! I just discovered it and read straight through, I couldn't stop reading!!! I love how you have Buffy interacting and sometimes deliberately not interacting with the kids from Hogwarts and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Are you going to be bringing Angel back from Hell like in the show? If so will he turn up in Sunnydale or in England? I love reading crossovers but I'm very partial to the B/A ship.
Again Wonderful Job, and I hope to see more sometime soon

:^) Nichole
Comments from author:
Thank you for all your nice comments =D I don't really know what I'll be doing with Angel. If he did come back to Sunny-D then there's no telling what Faiths reaction to him might be. I do have the begining of an idea for him, but I doubt if B/A would ever fully get back together. They both know the potential ramifications of that.
Review By [coley] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Good Story so far, looking forward to an update
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
I love this story so far! I wonder why there is such distrust from the Trio about Buffy. I mean sure, she's a new student and all, but to automatically act cold and accusing towards her for no apparent reason is odd of them. When will we be finding out who Buffy's real parents are? I know in chapter 14 you said something about finally letting us know in about 8 chapters or so. Sorry, I'm just extremely curious. Anyhow, again, I love this story so far. I do hope you are able to write more to it and update it soon. Keep up the fabulous work :)

p.s. This is the first story i've read that has Buffy in Ravenclaw. Most stories have her palced in Gryffindor or Slytherin. So, big kudos for that and especially your reasoning for putting her there. It all makes good sense. :)
Comments from author:
Well with all the rumors hanging about they're bound to be suspicious, and Ron always has jumpped to conclusions. She hasn't exactly been forthcoming or friendly in return so its not that supprising they find an american girl sent to hogwarts by fudge a little hard to trust.

The parents thing... well I wont say how many chapters it'll be, primarily because I dont know. When I said 8 chapters in chapter 14... well alot of stuff decided to happen in between that I wasnt entirely expecting. I actually haven't changed much in the chapter where she finds out since then tho. In the current plan it's in another 10 chapters, but this is very likely prone to change (as you can see my earlier estimation has already more than doubled).

I'm glad her in Ravenclaw works =D
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from Lin
Review:
Oh wow, thanks so much for the new chapter, i remember this story and was excited when i saw the update. I'm going to have to re read from the beginning because i can't remember much of the story now.

I love all the little details you are including in this series, your characters are spot on. I think that Hermionie trying to keep buffy from the DA was a great thing to add in, though i wonder why Neville wasn't invited or didn't show.

Anthony is a well written oc..i think it would be amusing for him to have to gather people to look at the shack as to cover the lie he told to buffy.

I hope that you continue a friendship with neville and buffy, he's far too timid still and i don't think the being friends with the critical judgmental trio is helping him develop and grow as a person.
Comments from author:
I might have to do the same and reread it before writing more... I cant remember what form all my plans for this story have been implemented yet. and um... Neville showed but it didnt take long? which as far as I remember it didnt really... plus she was hanging around waiting for Lupin for aaages without Anthony. Hmm might have to reread OotP too. lots of holiday reading for me ;P
Review By [Lin] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from Bluejello
Review:
A new chapter, huzzah!
So, Remus bailed, eh? I can see Buffy giving him a hard time the next time they do meet up. And the friendship between Neville and Buffy could be interesting.
I'll admit, I can't wait for a bit of a clash between Buffy and Umbridge, hehehe.
Comments from author:
Hmm yeah... tho, with my history the chapter when I have to write one will take a month or 2 to come out. I always seem to freeze up over conforntations. Will try to get some nice toad hatred in tho.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from (Past Donor)Jolinar
Review:
O. MY. GOD. you're really doing this. If I'd know nagging could accomplished such progress, I would have done more much sooner. You have no idea how glad I am to see this. I love both your stories so much. A real review to come soon. Welcome back to this terrific story. :) I'm off to check on Highlander now.
Comments from author:
LOL... I may not be quick about it but I do eventually follow through with things I say I'll do ;P
Review By [(Past Donor)Jolinar] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from justapiranha
Review:
Wow an update it has been two years will we have to Wait another two years for the next update?
Comments from author:
Nope only one!! (yeah okay, I know its not much better... real life keeps happening for some reason)
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Series of Unfinished Conversations" from (Recent Donor)Smurfette
Review:
I am so very glad that you continued this, after such a long time, too! Where you left it last time was very mean, and I hope that we don't have to wait another two years for another part. Please don't make us wait that long! This story actually has me throwing things at the Golden Trio, still, and yes. I do love it so. Please don't make me wait another two years!
Comments from author:
I'll try not to. Glad you like it =D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Smurfette] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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