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Review of chapter "Slytherin" from VillageOrchid
Review:
While I can't always find something specific to comment upon for each chapter, I am finding reading this story a joy. Thanks for adding more chapters so soon!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slytherin" from Leona
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First of all, thank you for the quick updates. It's great not to lose track of a story. Giles is one of the more difficult Scoobies to write. You have to be adult, urban, stay in character and recognize the depth of his life experience without losing track of the man he is today. You've more than succeeded in capturing him. Pairing him with Severus as his step-brother is genius. The flashbacks to their lives in Hogwarts is masterful, filling in the Syltherin lore in a believable and fun way. Step siblings do behave the way these two do. Antangonistic yes, but family first. Kudos.

And yes, I'm greedy and want more. Thanks again for this and all the great fics.
Review By [Leona] • Date [9 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slytherin" from EllandrahSylver
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“What are you going to do? Write your mother and hope she can convince him?” Rupert scoffed.

“Heavens no.” Severus frowned. “This is far more serious than that. I’m writing Gran.”


For a boy who didn't even want a step-brother, and DEFINITELY didn't want him in Hogwarts, Severus is pulling out the big guns to keep his brother there. I approve. More soon please?
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [9 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Best Served Cold" from tigerfanfrv
Review:
OMG thats funny, potter and firends getting thier hair turned blue hehehehhehahahahaha, i did have a question, are you going to go through thier entire hogwarts career or only thier first year?? just wondering, love it frequent updates rock
Comments from author:
Oh, this is going to be a long haul story! :) Be prepared to go all the way through NEWTs ;) Of course, I might end up breezing through years 2-6, but I'm hoping my muse will sustain me for the real excitement in the plot. I hope I can keep my updates frequent; I know how much that helps when reading a story.
Review By [tigerfanfrv] • Date [8 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I just read and enjoyed the last three chapters of your story. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from MrPlumbean
Review:
I absolutely love this fic, it's inspired thankyou for writing it. Also, I'd like to thankyou for being so constant with your updates, I can't count the number of stories I've loved that were not finished or the updates were years apart. It's superb keep it up.
Review By [MrPlumbean] • Date [6 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from (Past Donor)Mhalachai
Review:
I'm totally loving the relationship between Sev and Giles, in both timelines. Great rivallry there. I also like how you're writing Buffy and Giles, a great dynamic.

The way you're structuring the chapters, with the flashback scenes at the end, is very nice. The slow reveal is intriguing. I look forward to more!
Review By [(Past Donor)Mhalachai] • Date [6 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hellmouth" from Waterfall
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Have I told you how much I love this fic? It's absolutely wonderful! Good characterisation, very well written, and your switching between past and present is wonderfully done and makes the story more interesting. A little more focus on the present would be welcome, but that's just because I'm an impatient person and want to know what's going on...
Comments from author:
Hmm, I'll take that into consideration... Honestly, I think the back story is actually the more interesting part, but then, I know what's coming up and you don't. ;) I'll see what I can do about moving the present parts of the story more. Thanks for reading!
Review By [Waterfall] • Date [6 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hellmouth" from charliesgyrl
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So great, So sorrry i havn't reviewed earlier :( So is Riper a Deatheater like the rest of them and the Ighyon story a coverup?
Review By [charliesgyrl] • Date [5 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth" from tigerfanfrv
Review:
hey i like the format.i have one question though, were are teh scoobies?? wouldn't they stop by to see how giles is doing? or at least joyce. (though i'm just saying that because i like giles/joyce pairings hehehehehe) love quick updates and the insite to thier childhood while he is slowly recovering. kind of on the edge of my seat to see why and how snape got to sunnydale, love it please update soon
Review By [tigerfanfrv] • Date [4 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Patience" from Tassos
Review:
I just realized I hadn't reviewed this story yet, and was kinda startled by that because I'm really enjoying it. The idea of Giles and Snape as step brothers works really well, especially the way you have set it up so that they both retain their unique heritages. I like the story of them as children, but I must say I can't wait to see why Snape ended up in Sunnydale and to see how he handles the Scoobies. That will come in time and meanwhile, I'm going ot enjoy whatever you write because this is a really cool story.
Review By [Tassos] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Know-it-all" from Saphrine
Review:
I love this story, you are making wonderful use of flashbacks to tell us about the relationship between Gives and Severus. I hopr that you are able to give us the next chapter soon.
Review By [Saphrine] • Date [1 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Know-it-all" from VillageOrchid
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Good as a little bit of slice of life, and continuing the story. Giles in his world -- where other people exist and know of him... and Severus being accused of what he accuses Hermione of (reference to the story he comes from). Good balance,then in mentioning elements from both of their worlds.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, Rachel. I appreciate it. Let me know if there's anything you want to see in the story, and I'll see about working it in. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wallet" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Wicked cool in the flashback -- and very good and realistic in the "contemporary" scene. Nice use of thoughts.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My World" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Wasn't expecting another chapter so soon, but thanks!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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