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Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from JennRosbury
Review:
I like it...I would like to see more.

I have to say how much I LOVE that Kinsley got his ROFLMAO!!!!!
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from ghostworks
Review:
A very intriguing premise. It is a very different way of bringing the SGC and Buffy & Co together. I can't wait till Jack and Xander meet. However, I am curious about Anya still being around - how did it happen, any other differences from canon? Anyway it is an excellent start. I look forward to the rest.
Review By [ghostworks] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from JadeSama
Review:
I really like this, I like the way you've started it and I like the say you handled the integeration of the Buffy world into the SG world. I can't wait for Xander to meet every one at SGC. Will you be writing any more? I hope so. I'd like to know who you put in charge of the SGC, hummm... Willow, Buffy, Faith, Xander or Dawn?

I'd love to see Dawn get the StarGate for her birthday or something, that'd be interesting... Anyway, keep up the good work, I love it!
Review By [JadeSama] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from saa
Review:
Enjoyed the story so far. Can't wait to see where it leads. Please keep on going.
Review By [saa] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
An intersting beginning, and a novel way to bring the Scoobies into the SGC. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. (I have to wonder where they came up with that much money though.)

Also bonus points for appropriate use of Jack calling Daniel "Spacemonkey." To the best of my knowledge, that is the only time that Jack actually called Daniel that.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I'm assuming that in the time since the Sunnydale Hellmouth was destroyed the New Council, possibly with the help of the 'AI team and therefore Wolfram and Hart (sp?)' would have been able to get their hands on all the old Council accounts. And I'm assuming that they were loaded.
Thanks. I thought it fit. And I agree, I think that is the only time Jack did that...though I still can't figure out what it meant. Am I thinking too much?
Bye for now! ^_^
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from Jill
Review:
Cool idea. Good writing too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it. Thanks. I'll try to keep it up and update soon. ^_^
Review By [Jill] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from JUSTME
Review:
I think this sounds great! I can't wait to see where you go with it! Please write more :)
Review By [JUSTME] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from raven
Review:
I assume this is before Kinsley is kicked out and found to be a mole for the Goa'uld? I like that the President is pulling it out from under him, but as head of appropriations he really doesn't have any business fronting for the NID once it was decided to be too expensive (not that this stopped them in canon, but still...). Selling it to the SWC is an interesting move, even if the US doesn't technically own the gate (found it and "appropriated" it in Egypt) even if possession is 9/10th of the law as they say. Hm...I would think someone Anya's age would see the patent and technological value in the SGC's findings...the medicines alone could easily pay for a good year or two of gate expenses. Not that that would matter to Kinsey, but still. Interesting beginning. Looking forward to more exploration of the gate ownership and the value of the possession. Most importantly science vs. magic when dealing with the stargate.
Review By [raven] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from Tidmag
Review:
Interesting concept. First one that I've seen that curves towards this venue.
I'm wondering how they are funding it, and how a 2 year organization has a stash of 8 billion to buy anything, but then I'm not really up on the info about the council in the Buffyverse.
It should be interesting what the military manages to get, and how much they are going to pay to be allowed to use the gate, or volunteer men and hours.
Will other nations be asking to use the gate, at least the ones that know about it? Once again I'm not up on the Stargateverse.

The above wonderings are probably details that don't concern others, but sometimes I get curious about the mundane.

Did the council do what was described in another fic as being done by Xander, cleaning out a place of all it's valuables after defeating the big bad.

I await the next chapter. I'm sure it will be interesting.
Review By [Tidmag] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from ChaoticFred
Review:
Somehow, I don't think we've heard the last of Kinsey, though I wish I could've seen that bastard's face on the show. lol
Review By [ChaoticFred] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from gabbygal
Review:
yes, please keep writing this one, it sounds very cool.
Review By [gabbygal] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from BrendanM
Review:
Well, Interesting...

I'll be interested to see where this goes.
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from CozZaretta
Review:
I just wanted to say that this sounds like a GREAT story. I had to giggle a little when I read the synopsis on the Latest page. Way to go, it's such an original way of putting together a Crossover. I can tell you I will be waiting eagerly for your updates!
Review By [CozZaretta] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Money Makes The World Go Round" from spurious
Review:
Interesting. Needs more meat before I can say how good it is. You are right, the idea of the Prez selling the council the Stargate is a bit much. Not sure he really could sell a military installation like that. But what the hey, its fiction and it pisses Kinsey off no end.
Review By [spurious] • Date [25 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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