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Review of chapter "Family" from BkwrmDancer
This is really entertaining so far, I really like how you've paired them together, and I really can't wait to see how they find out about each other's secret lives. You have a great way of capturing the character and using dialogue, please keep it coming.
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from VillageOrchid
Aside from really enjoying the scenes in this chapter, I like the idea that Buffy's mom might have named her directly "Buffy" instead of Elizabeth with the nick-name of Buffy partially due to her biological father who never goes by Jonathan, except when legally forced to. My mom hated her middle name, so I didn't get one.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goodbyes" from VillageOrchid
I see it as a new beginning. And she might be back in time for College... or Willow could head out to Colorado.
The extra being needed responsibility will suit Faith... and maybe due to the Mayor's plan they'll bring Buffy back to the graduation cermony to help out, or maybe Faith and the scoobies can handle it.
I like how you're developing this story, and I'm curious how Buffy is going to be able to convince her father (without Thor's intervention) that it is a good time to take your daughter to work at a top secret project.
I suppose you could have something happen at her high school with Cassie. Looking forward to seeing how you do have it unfold.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goodbyes" from race
The storys good but your getting a 5 for the deppresing cliffhanger, let me just say Ghhhaaa!!!
Review By [race] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Last Testament" from VillageOrchid
An exciting AU concept. Please do continue. And if you favor Buffy being a lesbian or bi
(seeing a synopsis of one of your other stories) it might be fun for her to have a crush on Carter -- just like her dad!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Last Testament" from JasonBarnett
A nicely written fic, but there is a problem with your timeline. I'm not going to mention Joyce's death, so don't think it's that. Buffy spent the summer with her father after season 1. And he only began to cancel things in season 2. So the whole Buffy had stopped being his daughter years before, well it's two or three years to early.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds" from (Past Donor)TheStatue
I was always hoping you'd start posting your stories here... there are never enough Buffy-centered fics, and yours are both superb, and highly amusing or serious when appropriate.
I've always liked how you set up this first chapter; nothing hugely violent or cliché; I think the calm setting gives it more impact.
Review By [(Past Donor)TheStatue] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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