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Review of chapter "Caves" from Moriko
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I really like the story so far. I was wondering if Buffy would be getting a visit from any of the Sunnydale gang or if she would have a love interest. It kinda seems like it might be Lex, but that's just me. Please update soon.
Review By [Moriko] • Date [16 Nov 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Caves" from (Past Donor)MetropolisRising
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Nice. Despite the mutual universe thing( something I've always been a little leery of) I'm liking this fic. The two mains hav good strong voices for the most part and while it's an effort to dredge up what buffy looked like back then(pre skeletal) I'm having an alright time picturing her as a farm girl. I can't tell if you're trying to ship Clark and Buff or if you're just making them close like siblings, but I like it anyways. Keep going and I'll review towards the end! Thanks for this.
Review By [(Past Donor)MetropolisRising] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Caves" from Keshkreature
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Oh no! Bad council, bad Travers! I love your fic so far, and I can't wait to read more. Buffy and Clark get along so well, and your reason the council found out about her wherabouts so fast was brilliant.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [15 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Caves" from AshaDreamweaver
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I am liking this story so far! Smallville/Buffy crossovers are a rare commodity; it's always nice to see one! Liked the whole Clark/Buffy symmetry with the disappearing acts. Between 2 teenage superhero types with Big Secrets and Mysterious Pasts, strange occurances and freak disappearances should abound.

Looking forward to more! Please update!
Review By [AshaDreamweaver] • Date [22 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets" from (Past Donor)Deanie
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I like the idea... and the story's pretty good so far, but I've noticed one major mistake of a sentence near the end.

“If she’s going to be staying her, I want to be going to school,” Jonathon Kent said in a stern voice

"her" should be "here" and I think you meant to say "I want her to be going to school" -- unless Jonathon has some secret educational fetish I wasn't aware of ;)

Look forward to seeing how this goes.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Caves" from rutterla
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I like this story so far. I hope you continue to write this story. I'm interested in where you take this.
Review By [rutterla] • Date [31 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Caves" from LadyCarpathian
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AHHHH!! Why hasn't this been updated???? This is just getting interesting!!!! How would the counsil know about Krypton?? And why would they want Buffy killed if she knows???? PLEASE!! We MUST Know!!!
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Caves" from Goddessa
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I like this-although it is going a bit long. Can you please make it Buffy-centric or Buffy/Angel though please. I am not one for Buffy/Clark or anyone from his show. But I hope you continue this. It is cool. :)
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [28 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Connections" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
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Ok, I think I've officially read all your stories on ff.net now and I loved most of them. Just one thing, the updates. I kinda figured that you like making people wait, but you know, wait too long and they might just lose interest. And that would be a shame, now, get to work. *gg*
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Caves" from Riverchic
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Very interesting take on the Buffy/Clark line!
Review By [Riverchic] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting choice for an AU. A few typoes, but overall a promising story. With Buffy being 18, couldn't she easily say she already graduated from high school?
Lookng forward to what you have next, and lucky me, you have a few more chapters posted.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Caves" from nexus
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Interesting story. I'm glad that you have Buffy and Clark as friends and not as a romantic couple. It's a very believable relationship and everybody seems in character. It's intriguing to wonder what the Council knows about Krypton and why that would make them want to kill Buffy. I really, really, really (very much!) hope Travers gets what's coming to him! He is such a puke!

I also am curious if you'll eventually recap what's happened on the Hellmouth in Buffy's absence. Hopefully, without Buffy's presence, Faith doesn't feel alienated and the Scoobies rally around her and give her the support needed to avoid that downward spiral. Also, if it applies and you wonder at readers' preference on the issue, I'd rather Buffy (and Clark?) didn't suddenly show up to play hero at the Mayor's Ascension.

One major problem I have, however, is the confusion caused when switching from one scene to the next. You have no breaks or markers to deferentiate. It's kind of irritating when I realize it's switched to a different time and place. I then have to backtrack to the start of the scene and reread it. Not that it's a major trauma, it just really interrupts the flow of the story and detracts from the experience. Other than that issue and the occasional mistake in spelling/words (ie 'stead' was used not 'stake'), it's been great. I've enjoyed reading this and look forward to more.
Review By [nexus] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Runaways" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
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I think I watched about 4 episodes of Smallville all in all, but this is a great start with lots of potential, so just keep going, and fast, if you don't mind. I'm a greedy reader.
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Runaways" from Zakhynsia
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cool. please keep it going
Review By [Zakhynsia] • Date [27 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Runaways" from judge
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I think I have read all of these stories before. Possibly on Fanfic.net as a crossover, but I don't think any of them were ever finished. Will they be this time?
Review By [judge] • Date [27 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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