Review of chapter "Chapter 9 - Returns" from Cilou
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uh? there's not more? Hey! You can't end it there, it cruel... really really mean!!!! lol, update soon, I can't wait to read more! ^_~
Review By [Cilou] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 - Returns" from kumagorou
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O_O thats just a mean place to stop.... Jack vs. the Slayer for Dawn - Live on Pay-Per-View. ~_^ Its gonna be great...although I do feel very sorry for both Jack and Dawn; just when they were figuring things out.
Review By [kumagorou] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Really great story. That last line in this chapter was absolutely priceless! Buffy isn't going to be too thrilled with Jack. I love the Dawn/Jack interaction. Never really thought about that pairing, but now I love it. Update soon!
Dawn's reaction to Jack's kiss was unexpected and absolutely brilliant! Excellent characterisation of Will as the big brother figure in this chapter too. You're updating way more often than many fanfic authors I could mention *cough* me *cough*. Thanks for sharing.
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it. You mentioned Buffy, are we going to actually find out what happened to her and Xander? Are they still in the ocean, or are they now somewhere else? Keep up the good work!
oooh, love love love! Dawn/Jack's a great paring! Will we find out what hapened to the other scoobs that had to make with the plank walking? more please?
Review By [charliesgyrl] • Date [5 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
interesting premise, and i am excited, as i like the slightly unconventional pairing of dawn/jack... just one little observation, thought - i don't know if jack would call her "little bit", because i don't think that's a british thing, i think that's a spike thing. it seems a little out of place in this story, not coming out of spike's mouth.
Review By [magicfaerie] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Not Rated
I LOVED it! You had me laughing out loud...which had quite a few folks in my computer lab looking at me oddly... hee hee. Keep up the great work and I can't WAIT to see Dawnie's reaction... *g*
Review By [kumagorou] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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