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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from renelf
Review:
Another excellent chapter. This one made me laugh out loud. I love the bit about Dawn's subconscious having a Harlequin streak! The Dawnster will certainly be a challenge for Cap'n Jack Sparrow.
Review By [renelf] • Date [3 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from immortalwizardelffan
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LMAO!!!!! I can imagine little Dawnie...well maybe not so little Dawnie, doing exactly what she did fighting with the whore who insulted her. Can't wait to see the reactions to the kiss.

Seems like Will is turning out to be like an older brother for Dawn as the fic goes on. keep up the good work. And update soon.
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Brief Interlude of the Spontaneously Ge" from Scooter
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Very good story, so far. Witty adn smart, I like it. Hope to see an update soon
Review By [Scooter] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Tassos
Review:
Very cute! It had me giggline, the idea of Dawn and Jack together is just perfect somhow. Looking forward to the next part.
Review By [Tassos] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from renelf
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What an excellent and fun fic! I love Jack's internal mutterings about William and shrimp. It will be interesting to see how you weave Dawn's character into the rest of the movie's story. Is Dawn going to get home? Ignore that spoilery question. I think the story will be great either way.
Review By [renelf] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jack's Girl" from (Past Donor)angelaask
Review:
“Do you like shrimp?” Haha! :}

Sweet! I love this and your characterization of Jack is great! Very humorous and can't wait for more Dawn and Jack interaction. ~ angelaask
Review By [(Past Donor)angelaask] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Fan2
Review:
Now this is one worth reading! Please do go on! I will be looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Review By [Fan2] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from tremerid
Review:
Ohhhh man that was soooo good. I was snickering and laughing in turns throughout the entire thing! I could just picture that very reaction from jack, but then again- as will pointed out with his rendition of the swaying zombie later on describing jacks odd behavoir-jack is a bit tilted now isnt he? Lol, i had a wonderful time reading this and i hope you continue it soon. Keep up the great work, and dont let life get to you.

-Tremerid
Review By [tremerid] • Date [29 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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