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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Nice to see another part of the Dawn/Noir puzzle added :). And to see that she isn't invulnerable. A 'perfect' assassin would be too much. I wish I could right those kinds of action scenes...

[No!... don't stop posting! This is one of the great 'Dark Dawn' fics.]
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad your enjoying it.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Daeth
Review:
I enjoy reading this quite a bit. There are not a lot of completely Dawn-centric stories out there and this one has some very interesting aspects to it.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm happy to hear that.
Review By [Daeth] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Lorency
Review:
The chapter is awesome. I can't wait for Dawn to meet Max. It's so cool

Peace out
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. It's good to hear you're enjoying the story.
Review By [Lorency] • Date [6 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very nice update. I like this alternate Buffyverse. This Noir/Dawn is a very interesting character. I loved it that Harmony got out of Sunnydale only to fall victim to her own greed and stupidity. It made me laugh. I hope you continue this story as I find it fascinating.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's good to hear you enjoyed the Harmony thing. And don't worry about this story not being continued, while it isn't completely finished yet most chapters are already done and the rest will follow as soon as I write them down.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from pcody
Review:
I have been eagerly waiting for you to continue the Dawn as Noir series. As always, something different.

One minor aside, I cannot figure out what you meant when you wrote "From the criminals led three mayor lines of communication. The first of these ended up at the other underworld." Even accounting for the typo, the sentance still doesn't make sense.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. And yes, I do prefer to do things differently.
Okay, if it doesn't make sense it was obviously bad writing on my part. Let's try to explain it then.
The first part I think is pretty clear, the criminals have contacts with three groups of beings. The three that are mentioned in the rest of the story.
The second part tries to convey that the first of these groups to be talked about will be the 'other underworld', the vampires and demons.
I hope that cleared it up. If not, tell me and I'll try to give a better explanation.
Review By [pcody] • Date [9 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
Review:
Wonderful, wonderful story. I really like the way you have merged the Buffyverse with Max's world. And the way you have made the whole thing very 'cyberpunkish' is just perfect. I can't wait to read more. I just hope that eventually White has a professional meeting with Noir. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from CPTSkip
Review:
Damn! Somehow I don't think this will be a happy fuzzy Buffy story. Excellent work. I could darn near feel the rage radiate out of my monitor. I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And no, this won't be a happy fuzzy story. It more or less explores the darker side of the Dawn/Kirika mix. That doesn't mean there aren't some lighter parts in it though :-).
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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