I really enjoyed readying your fanfic, so I thought you might like me to review. I think that this is a very original fic and is very detailed and well thought out. I would love to read about more flying/ gliding scenes, love those lol. Anyway I really like the direction the story is going and hope to see and update in the near future.
Keep up the good work,
EyesOfGold.
P.S. Poor Xander and his loneliness. *Sniffle*
Review By [EyesOfGold] • Date [11 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Really great writing! I hope the girls find a way against Xanders loneliness. Nice way how you let act Cordelia with this situation. It seems to me that Willow slides a bit to much in the background. She still researchs the glamour, isn't she? I look forward how Buffy and Xander will take action against the Order of Taraka and how Angel will feel about his comming apart from Buffy. Hope for the next great chapter(s) soon! ;-)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Holy crap! That was awsome. I love the way that you work the characters in this story. They all seem to be people, not just names with superpowers like some stories I've read. This is a good mix of things from the series and new stuff. The one thing I didn't like about Buffy was that I never knew what was happening to anyone else. You've blended the points of view very well. Great work!
Review By [coffeeninja2] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
looks like buffy and cordy are both falling for xander.the kiss from buffy should help boost xander's confidence.your dru is one of the best written I've ever read.have xander's parents noticed him missing yet?great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [10 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
