Just discovered this story and its prequel. Great job in bringing Buffy and Willow to St. Louis. I like the way you are handling the "truce" with JC and his city. I sincerely hope that you haven't abandoned this story since it's been almost 6 months since the last update. I'd really like to know what happens next. :)
tsk tsk..in the car huh...man, yummmm...nathaniel (sp?) ...car....naked....yummmm...*drool*...i'm okay i swear. So plot wise i'm really liking the story, the pizza talks should be interesting.
Lol! Yes, I guess it does take a lot to shock a Sunnydalian. Still enjoying your story a whole lot. Thanks for sharing your imaginary playmates with us.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Buffy driving? :-0 I think I'd rather a penguin on crack. Anways lovely sence there between Slyvie and Xander. It's great how you haven't taken Xander straight to the top and given him loads of power, he's just not the quick rise to power kinda guy. I can't wait to read the next chapter, it should be awesome. -Mashell
Review By [Mashell] • Date [8 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great update I loved it. I really really can't tell you how happy I am to see that you haven't made Anita all bitchy and mean. I get the Xander slur now thanks for explaining. So is Slyvie going to chew Xander out for not telling the pack about the slayer. If so: GO XANDER!!! hehehehe :-) Great well I can barely wait for the next update. - Mashell
Review By [Mashell] • Date [3 Mar 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Why the two girls wouldn't be friends with Xander anymore? They know him for some years now and they hadn't had a problem with Oz. And Xander is still the protector of his friends as before! So Xander shouldn't be worried. ;-) Can't await to see the three of them in the circus. Will Willows shields be enough to prevent her from being called a witch?
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [23 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
