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Review of chapter "2" from Stormy
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Poor Xander!! Will they stand by him? How will the vamps react to Buffy and Willow? Keep going!!!
Review By [Stormy] • Date [23 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Mashell
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Nifty-ness I really like. You've even described Anita really well, kept her in character real well you have. Love the whole Xander being the powerful werewolf protector. Glad you haven't glossed over how seriously mad Jean-Claude would be if the Slayer showed up in his city. Also spelling error I noticed: Jean-Clod is Jean-Claude and preternatural. I know probably everyone else has mentioned it but I thought I should incase they don't. Anyways really great 2nd chapter I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Apologies if Jean Clod jarred. I was going for the less flattering spelling as something of a Xanderism. He doesn't like the guy and it was a chance for him to express the dislike a little bit when it's either his thoughts or talk with friends. He does go for the proper spelling and pronunciation when he mentions the bloodsucker to Anita in a more formal setting.
Review By [Mashell] • Date [22 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
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Hmm-- poor Xander, having to deal with letting Buffy and Willow see the new him. It also seemed that Xander is getting some rank in the pack.. As for the impending doom and destruction, I've been in a New Madrid earthquake, remember all the hub bub about the Big One in 1990, so the scoobies better stop it from happening, cause I kind of like the area I live in! Keep up the great work!
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [22 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from spacey
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...xander didn't tell anyone he's fuzzy? and, i mean buffy couldn't tell with oz, but shouldn't she have learned the feel by now because she's all slayery?
Review By [spacey] • Date [20 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from Thewander
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Very good, Glad Buffy and willow are in St louis now.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from Hecatonchires
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Interesting start to this bit. Was that some repressed X/B coming to the surface in the sniffing incident? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from Caliadragon
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This has the potential to be great fun for all three of the Scoobies. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from Mashell
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Nifty! I like the begining. I saw this and had to go read the first one, though I think I might have read it somewhere along the line. hhmmm. Oh well this just great I can't wait for more. Buffy and Willow seem great and Anita wonderful. I love how she so kindly got rid of the Delacriox, and the mug, amusing. Also I the title I get it. The whole meet me in St. Louie at the fair, Worlds fair of 1904 reference. -Mashell
Review By [Mashell] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
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Glad to see your continuing the story and that Buffy and Willow have stepped. That should make for an interesting time all around. Continue soon!
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from WhiteWolf
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I have a feeling that JC isn't going to like that Willow and Buffy came unannounce into his town. They did came unannounce, right? And I'm sure whatever Buffy and Willow came for in St. Louise, somebody isn't going to like it. *grin*
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Me at the Fair" from desartartt
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It looks like Buffy could use a rebound interest--how about Damion? Also, Why are the girls in St. Louis? Maybe a place to stach Dawn and get her away from Glory and protected by the triomverent?
Review By [desartartt] • Date [19 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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