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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from MarcD
Review:
Wow...great chapter. I really enjoyed the interaction between the various, and new, characters. More soon please...i can't wait to see how they play....or threaten...or beat the crap...out of Talos. More soon please!

mjd

ohh..and by the way...in the beginning...you have the chapter labeled as number 10...and not 11 :-)
Review By [MarcD] • Date [28 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Hotfoot
Review:
Nice work here. Xander a slave? I hope everything works out for him. Hurry up with chapter 11.
Review By [Hotfoot] • Date [28 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from MarcD
Review:
Well...poor Xander...err...I mean...poor 'Zed' hehe...I hope he gets through this all right. Great chapter...eagerly awaiting more!

mjd
Comments from author:
Thanks, mjd. I want to thank you for all the reviews you left, I truly appreciate it. As for 'Zed,' he's going to pull through fine. But, the way to get there will be interesting. Oh, btw, I read Reunited, good work there. Thank you for the mention too...lol.

White Werewolf::Going back to work on part 11 before class starts
Review By [MarcD] • Date [25 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from MarcD
Review:
Xander looked at the flattened one. “What happened to that one?” He chuckled lightly, “I kinda fell on that one.”
hehehe...i don't think that was quite what Xander had in mind when he was wishing for pancakes :)
Great part...hope to see more soon!

mjd
Comments from author:
Nope. No pancakes. He's probably thinking, 'Do I really have to eat that? How about that leftover rabbit?'

More will come, Sir. More will come.
Review By [MarcD] • Date [6 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like how Brooklyn hunted. Very funny.
Comments from author:
I thought it would be funny too. What I have to try and do is treat Brooklyn now as a novice allot of the time. This should lead to allot of funny situations.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [6 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from MarcD
Review:
A great chapter! Please, keep them coming!

glad to see the relationships/friendships forming :)

more soon please!

mjd
Comments from author:
Now that Xander and Brooklyn are stuck in the past, I have to create some bonds that will help them in the future. So, the sunrise for Brooklyn gave a perfect leeway for some relationship formation.

White Werewolf
Review By [MarcD] • Date [4 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Hotfoot
Review:
I like how you add humour to this fic. It keeps it very reminicent of Xena. And by adding India, are you going by canon or is this something else?
Review By [Hotfoot] • Date [2 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from XanManFan
Review:
Werewolf,

Glad to see this updated. Like how Brooklyn will be able to move during the day. This should be intersting in itself. Keep up the good work.
Review By [XanManFan] • Date [1 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MarcD
Review:
Loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting too long. I also liked your reasoning for the language barrier (or lack thereof) :-)

mjd
Comments from author:
The language issue was something I had a hard time dealing with. Most fics that cross the buffyverse with the herc/xenaverse tend to just ask Athena to cast a spell so the language problem could be easily solved. I, myself did this with the Phoenixverse. But, I wanted to try and do something different with this fic. I still incorporated Athena, but did something totally different. I have to thank my Hebrew School Classes for the Tower of Babble story on that one.

White Werewolf
Review By [MarcD] • Date [29 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Alltorian
Review:
Great chapter, but I need more. Please keep writing.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [29 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Rivana
Review:
Liking this story so far. Love time travel. Watch out though so Xena and Gab' ways don't become to modernized. If they're in ancient Greece it should reflect on many things I think.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Time travel is very confusing, and I don't plan to modernize them (not at this point anyway--LOL) Changing their points of view due to Xander being there won't happen. Not by far anyway. But keep in mind when Xander brought up Newton. One of his laws is every action has an equal or oppoisit reaction. So, for Xander just being there, things will change. But the question is now, how much?

White Werewolf
Review By [Rivana] • Date [29 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Caliadragon
Review:
I love this story and the way that you are intergrating Xander into Xena and Gabrielle's lives.

Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
I needed to find a way for Xander and Brooklyn to stay a while in Greece. So, breaking the Phoenix Gate in haf made that possible. And they're going to be hanging around for a while. So, I want them to get close as friends and even closer for Xander and Gabrielle. :)

White Werewolf
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [28 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Your writing skills have improved quite a bit sense the last time I read your work. Nice work, hope to see more soon.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [26 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I have two perfect ways to send a message to future to the Scoobies and/or Goliath for help. One a cryptic message for Giles in Gabriella's scrolls. Two, find Hercules and give him a letter/message to give to Giles/Goliath at a specific place and time in the future.
Comments from author:
For a fan of Back to the Future, I never thought of giving the letter to Hercules or either having Gabrielle writing a cryptic scroll for Giles to find later. But, right now, that's too easy an answer for Xander and Brooklyn. The thing is, I'm planning on going the canon route of season 4 of Xena and want to keep Brooklyn and Xander around for a while not to mention have GX form at a natural rate, and not forced. This fic is far from over. So, expect the India arc as well as Ceaser. At the same time though, it would be different and simular.

White Werewolf

Glad you like the fic.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from XanManFan
Review:
White Werewolf,

I am truly enjoying this crossover. Not only does it include Xena and Gabrielle, but it also has Gargoyles. Two shows that I enjoyed growing up. Adding Xander to the mix makes it perfect. Please update soon.
Review By [XanManFan] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Not Rated
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