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Review of chapter "Act III" from banner
Review:
These are so interesting.
Comments from author:
Glad you like
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Act II" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
10/10 for originality. What a fantastic idea! Brilliant, thank you. I hope you haven't abandoned it.
Comments from author:
Still plugging away, just RL issues interfering.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [8 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act II" from banner
Review:
Intense and fascinating. I like this view of Buffy and Oma. By the way, what name does Oma call her by?
More Daniel, please!
Comments from author:
Oma and Frank usually call her "Kid," "Kiddo" and stuff like that. And yes, there will be more Danny-boy. He's got to answer Buffy's question!
Review By [banner] • Date [2 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act II" from Cristina
Review:
great chapter, please, please update soon.

Are you gonna pair Buffy with Daniel or Angel? I'm OK with eather of them.
Comments from author:
Umm, pairings. The answer, I believe is "yes." Buffy will be returning to Sunnydale and Season 3 at the end of this story, since it is an Anne alternative. (no, I don't know who saves Chanterelle/Lily/Anne, sorry) I'm already getting plotbunnies for a sequel, though.

Astral Anne is getting updated monthly, and I've got 2 acts plus an epilogue left to write for a total of 6 parts.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [12 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act II" from Goddessa
Review:
*sniff* kidna angsty chappie there, dontchya think? Continue though. Like the comments. Some B/A sisterly bonding would be great. BA ALWAYS!!!
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [30 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act II" from spacey
Review:
kickass. will daniel's stay be extended?
Comments from author:
I'm trying to not mess too much with either timeline. Besides the obvious shift in having Season 3 Buffy coincide with Season 8 SG-1. So the dialogue between Danny-boy and Buffy will be more of an insertion in the flow of Threads.
Review By [spacey] • Date [29 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Act II" from onlimain
Review:
I like this story so far; I'm glad you updated. Angel's "hell" is so sad; he probably has to relive/re-enact everything Angelus did. Since this is in response to the "Anne the Waitress" challenge, that means she still somehow goes back to Sunnydale and Angel still returns right? For the both of them, I hope so. I'll be looking forward to more interaction between Daniel and Buffy. I can't wait for an update.
Comments from author:
Yeah, for the most part, I'm trying to make this only AU for the one episode. As for Angel's "hell", it took me weeks to even figure out what I wanted it to be like. I guess it came off evil enough. And there will definately be more Buffy and Daniel in the next Act.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [29 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act II" from renelf
Review:
Love the premise behind this story and I love your scriptish writing style. Your idea of the hell dimension in which Angel is trapped is just heart breaking. I like your characterisation of Buffy, she's messed up but still sassy. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
The scriptish writing is a bit of an experiment for me. I'm glad you like it. I just thought that a replacement episode should read like one. I'm not strictly adhering to the page quotas for a commercial hour screenplay, but it's close when you take into account the compression inherent in narrative style. (yep, I actually have learned that stuff, having tried being a film major.)
Review By [renelf] • Date [29 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Act II" from banner
Review:
Oh, My.
Please keep writing - I can't wait!
Review By [banner] • Date [29 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act II" from greylight
Review:
Wow, what a well written story. I'm wondering what your plans are (will Buffy be sent back, etc)....but am also enjoying sitting back and reading what you've written. And like so many of the others, I love your title!
Review By [greylight] • Date [29 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act 1" from Odjn
Review:
You finally continued!

You might want to look at the coding for this. All the special characters, like commas and apostrophies are coming in weird. Or, that might just be my browser. I'm not sure.
Comments from author:
The symbol wonkiness has been fixed.
Review By [Odjn] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Act 1" from Goddessa
Review:
Kinda confused at parts, but I'm pretty sure I got the point. So she's ascended now. She's met Faith. She's kinda in a way interacted on Earth. So what's she gonna do to make it a Btvs/Sgc xover?

BA ALWAYS!!!
Comments from author:
I hate to disappoint you, but Buffy will not be going to Cheyenne Mountain or the SGC in this story. She will be interacting with exactly one SG-1 member. Three guesses who, first two don't count. She may meet the others if, and I repeat if, I decide to do a sequel.
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act 1" from onlimain
Review:
This was a nice beginning. I like how you incorporated (sp?) one of Faith's stories into this story. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act 1" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Nice first meeting and I'm sure Buffy isn't going to leave Faith alone. She can be very determined.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Astral Anne" from Odjn
Review:
I wish you'd update this. The title, the concept... It's just fantastic.
Comments from author:
Working on it. Right now I'm stalled in the middle of act 1 of what will probably 4 plus an epilogue. I'll get there, I promise!
Review By [Odjn] • Date [25 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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