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Review of chapter "There are Moments" from NoLifeKing
Review:
This is a great story. I like to see a calmer Anita. :-)
It's great how you describe the clash of the slayer and leopard essence and its result.

I like it, that you post each chapter in new stories, as then, I assume, there will not be the danger of short chapters. ;-)

Now I look forward for Buffy meeting some major players or her visiting the city.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from Drow
Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue this fic. I liked this chapter so much, I read it more than once!

I love the growing relationships you're depicting between Buffy, Hope and the pard.

On the question of dom/sub and Buffy - I don't see her having any problem following someone
she respects and believes in. On the other hand, Buffy would never follow anyone who ruled by
power alone. I think that both Anita and Micah are going to see the real slayer if they ever try
to make Buffy do something she truly believes is wrong.

The only critique I have relates to the halfway house. In Anita's world, weres don't trust civil authority. They might isolate Buffy and Hope, but they would never turn them over to an
official halfway house. Most weres are "in the closet" so that they can lead a somewhat normal
life (job etc...). Sending Buffy and Hope to a halfway house would "out" them.
Review By [Drow] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from (Past Donor)Anneliese
Review:
This was really good. I can't wait to see their first full moon and how Elizabeth reacts to being totally dominated. :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Anneliese] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it, so far. I like how the slayer and the beast are fighting in Buffy. Well not really liking because it hurts Buffy, but the concept of it. Please write the next chapter.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Although the idea of Buffy becoming a were isn't original, the way you are doing it is new/different. It makes sense that the "slayer" wants to fit in and not attract too much attention. Hard to 'hunt' if people/things know you are coming. I like how your Buffy isn't THE dominant person/creature in the room but still has something special. Vampire slayers in the Buffy-verse are usually subservient to someone. Soldiers, not leaders (Look at what happened in Season 7 when Buffy was forced by circumstances to lead - her solitary hunter methods didn't work too well with a large group.)

A very interesting story/universe. I look forward to future installments. Especially her first meeting with an Anita-verse vampire :-).
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from Locathah
Review:
Like the story... but finds it very hard to picture Buffy submitting to anyone :o
Review By [Locathah] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
NICE CHAPTER! I like how you displaed how the leopard and slayer were fighting eachother then merging. that was a nice touch :) I also like how you don't have her as wanting to control her....the bond with Micah was great! Keep up the great work
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
Review:
I read Running Toward Nothing (that is the name, right?) a couple of weeks back, and I totally loved it. I feel bad for not reviewing it. I'm reviewing now, this story is great and I hope you keep it going at a decent pace.
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from Claddagh
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I have been looking forward to this, and I must admit, you did not disappoint. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from Discord
Review:
I loved it! Yours has to be the most original BtVS/AB crossover ever! I love the way you've developed the relationships between the characters. The bond between Buffy and Hope is so cute. Altough while I agree that Buffy would definately be dominant to most if not all lycanthropes I do wonder and whether or not she'd be dominant to Micah as well. I like the way you wrote it though. Buffy being more atuned to her beast because of her experience with the Slayer essence. I would think she is dominant to Micah and Anita although she understands she's to new and needs to learn more about being a were leopard first. Very cute interaction between Buffy and Micah and the others too. Keep it up, can't wait to read more!
Review By [Discord] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from SarahL
Review:
I hadnt read Running Towards Nothing before so i went back and read it and that was wonderful, I really enjoyed these fics. I think they are really well written and to answer your question i definately want to see Hope and Buffy’s first full moon.
Please update soon

sarah- x
Review By [SarahL] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
Review:
Nice job with Buffy establishing herself as a protector, dominant to many of the other leopards, but still submissive to her Nimir-Raj and Nimir-Ra. Loved her kicking Elizabeth's ass and knocking Caleb about a bit as well. Also I thought the idea of having the Slayer and her beast fighting for dominance was a great idea. It makes sense, very cool that they ended up uniting. She's going to be hellawicked when she hones her instincts and gains more knowledge of her beast and the whole nine yards. I love the way you're writing her and Hope's immersion into the Anitaverse. It's nice to see how others react to her and Hope and how they're dealing. I'd love to see their first full moon or at least have some mention made of it in your next story. I also really liked Micah taking her out on her first hunt and her sleeping with he, Anita, and Nathaniel afterwards. Will be interesting to see how she continues to adapt to her new life and I look forward to your next update.
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from PleaseDeleteAccount
Review:
Great story so far. It would definitely be interesting to see their first full moon. I look forward to the next chapter!
Review By [PleaseDeleteAccount] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from SkyeDeploro
Review:
Wow! I had read your other story/chapter that went with this one a while ago hoping there would be more to it. And now there is! I can't wait to see what you write next!!
SkyeDeploro
Review By [SkyeDeploro] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There are Moments" from blazblaz
Review:
Hey love what yoiu have done with this. I can't wait to see their first full moon togather I hope that hte next part comes out soon.
Review By [blazblaz] • Date [9 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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