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I'll Have an Apocalypse and a 2X Armageddon To Go

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Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, X" from CPTSkip
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Great update. Xander's comment in Egyptian about grabbing the "out of shape Colonel" made me laugh. I hope Daniel doesn't transtlate that portion of the exchange between Xander and "Murry" for the official report. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, Part IX" from Rivana
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Really good. Though I'm not very fond of the 'Harris' and 'hot chicks' labeling in the text the plot is entertaining enough.
Comments from author:
The 'hot chicks' was a prank played on me to see if I pay attention to the beta changes, I guess. It's been changed. As to the Harris, it reflects the 'mode' Xander is in during this time frame, wherein he is acting more mature, and along the lines of the military situation he's getting into. As he starts balancing things out more, the labelings will change to reflect how he's acting at a given time. In Sunnydale, he'll be Xander with the old scoobs, Lex to any co-workers and Faith, Harris to most military/authority types. Riley and his guys will refer to him as Harris when talking about him, but probably call him Lex as they fight the 'bad things' toether in the future. And hopefully, no one will call Xander late for dinner! Thanks for reading and the feedback, can't believe I missed the 'chick' comment.
Review By [Rivana] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, Part VIII" from nexus
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Great premise and very original cross (first I've seen, at any rate). I really like this story so far. The 'recruitment' plot is very interesting and the fact that SG-1 is involved makes me very happy. Xander involved in any way with SG-1 is my absolute fave. Such a complex story ... I'm impressed!
Review By [nexus] • Date [19 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, Part IX" from Elleria
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So, Xander joined the Initiative, which is being run by NID....and SGC is trying to recruit him, maybe. Interesting...I hope he can stop the Initiative before it creates Adam...or something....anyway, I'm looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, Part IX" from CPTSkip
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I really am enjoying your story. I hope Xander and Faith finally get together as I think they make a cute couple. Lol! Speaking of girlfriends, where are Cordy and Anya in this AU? Not that you have to force them into your story, I was just wondering. Thanks for all the jolly good entertainment. Lol!
Comments from author:
Cordy is still around, but after her parents made her break it off with Xander, they're just very good friends and she's busy reestablishing herself as Queen C. No Fluke, no Anya. Cordelia will be seen from time to time.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go 6" from CPTSkip
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Lol! I do think that Spike is having a really, really bad day. I laughed out loud at the poor schmuck. And somehow, I don't think Amy's spell is going to go right. Gee, I must be psychic. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go 6" from Elleria
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More soon!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [14 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, Part IV" from CPTSkip
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Gack! Oh Ethan, don't you ever learn? Lol! Great story so far and I can't wait to see how Ethan gets his ass handed to him this time. Write more, please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse & A Double Armageddon to Go, Part IV" from Elleria
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Oh, this is not of the good....so not of the good...wonder if Xand'll be a bad guy or a good guy...I can't remember to much of The Gladiator...if that's the movie you're using...
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse and A Double Armageddon to Go, Part II" from (Past Donor)boo
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this is pretty interesting. i like how the story is proceeding but the thing that keeps hanging me up is Xander's speech patterns. He sounds like some hick country yokel and Xan never spoke like that on buffy and I don't htink the summer with the soldier guy would be enough to change that that much. Just my opinion.
Comments from author:
Hmm, I'm missing the 'hick' in this. Is it the fact there are a couple of "ain'ts" and a couple heck/hells? I honestly can't find the hick country yokel in the speech patterns. Has he dropped some of the California-Speek? Yeah, on purpose, it comes from Xander being constantly around one type of people, so Xander will talk a little less Sunnydale, and a little more grown up. And while I don't really 'hear the hick' if it's there, it's probably because he's been around Gulf Coast oilmen and Harry Stamper (Bruce Willis), men, the entire summer, who think of him as Harry Jr. Though from being on unofficial chaperone duty with Harry's daughter, and because he a long-time driller, he's picked up the hot tea-drinking habit.

I'm planning for his speech over the next story-year to become much more mature than canon, and drops some of the 'need attention' aspects where Xander tended to burst into a conversation with a quip or remark. Now, if he says it, he'll wait until the person is done speaking, THEN make a remark.

But if you notice something blatant, that doesn't fit with what I've just said, please let me know so I can go back and look at it again. Thanks for reading
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [10 Apr 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse and A Double Armageddon to Go, Part II" from Elleria
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Pretty good so far. :-) Looking forward to the next bit. More soon please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I’ll Have an Apocalypse and A Double Armageddon to Go, Part II" from Willowfan
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Wow! I love this story. Can't wait for more:) How long before 'Armageddon' is it? Is Xander gonna replace A.J.? If not, will Xander be going up? hehe...write more soon, I can't wait!

Willowfan:)
Comments from author:
Summer, after Graduation. Replace AJ? No, but he better keep his hands of Xander's "little sister." Snicker.
Review By [Willowfan] • Date [10 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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