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Review of chapter "4" from (Past Donor)ApocSM
Review:
WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
Review By [(Past Donor)ApocSM] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from KyliaSkydancer
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by the way...I thought I'd mention that "knocking on heavens door" was originally done by Bob Dylan. The guns n roses came across with it later.

lol I had a sudden urge to read this fic again for some reason...imagine my disaappointment at having to stop without learning anything new.
Review By [KyliaSkydancer] • Date [18 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from ShadowOTE
Review:
Great story. Please update soon!!!
Review By [ShadowOTE] • Date [26 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Family And Q series" from KyliaSkydancer
Review:
Well, I finished this story (or as far as you've gotten) yesterday and have to tell you this is very brilliant.

I have a humungous urge to go look at Xander-centric star trek fics nbow....after I read a few more of your stories.

*waits 'very' patiently for updates*
Comments from author:
Thank you - I am sketching out the next chapter of this story, but it's taking time ... time I don't have a lot of these days (odd, during the summer months, I have less time than I do in the school months - weird).
Review By [KyliaSkydancer] • Date [15 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Family And Q series" from (Moderator)LisaF
Review:
I had to stop reading this in the middle of Part 1, because all of the author's notes were incredibly distracting and irritating. I stopped reading despite the fact that I was beginning to enjoy the story. Every time I ran into another author's note, it just derailed my attention from the plot, which aggravated me.

I strongly encourage you to repost this, with all of the in-text author's notes removed. From what I saw, some of them can be incorporated into the text of the story with only a little effort, and the rest of them belong at the beginning of the chapter, prior the story.

I would like to be able to give you feedback on the plot, but I just couldn't get past the author's notes to enjoy the story itself.
Comments from author:
Okay, I'll remove the AN's in there - I thought I had gotten them all, but apparently I did not. Thank you for telling me this.
Review By [(Moderator)LisaF] • Date [12 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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