Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from boo
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I really like this. Glad to see Kyra show up alive. Please continue.
Review By [boo] • Date [2 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from spk
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Definitely an interesting twist with Kyra as a slayer. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Mother’s Love" from wizathogwarts
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Just started to read this and plan on continuing but I noticed that you said you pulled from the script. You made a mistake with the headstone and I don't mean the insertions you made regarding being a mother as that's part of your story. Here's what the script has: Cut to: graveyard, day. It's sunny and pretty with lots of trees and grass. Zoom in slowly on a headstone. A small bunch of flowers lies on the grass in front of it.
The headstone reads:
BUFFY ANNE SUMMERS 1981-2001 BELOVED SISTER DEVOTED FRIEND SHE SAVED THE WORLD A LOT
If you notice, the name is BUFFY ANNE SUMMERS, not Elizabeth. The reason is that her legal name is Buffy. She was never called or referred to as Elizabeth in the show. All her legal documents, school records etc, called her Buffy. Just thought you might like to know for accuracy's sake.
Comments from author:
I appreciate that you went to all that trouble. However, there is a reason that I changed what the script said and it will come out later in the story. And also, keep in mind, this is beyond AU... I mean, iIseriously doubt that Buffy will EVER run into what I have planned for her in the series... LOL
But again, thank you for for pointing it out and I hope that you'll enjoy the story!
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from jammiesMM
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I am going to check out this story since I have you on my favs list. But I did want to let you know that you might want to check out this last chapter. The "solid lines" that are in the chapter are too long and it makes it so you have to scroll left/right as well as up/down.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the info! That's what happens when you're trying to edit and you've taken pain killers... LOL!
And I hope you enjoy this story as well as Destiny's Gifts! :-)
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from oldshoe
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Did I miss someting? In your fic Buffy is at the end of season five, so she never woke up in her grave. Also, no body, anyway. Looks interesting, I'll definitely keep reading!
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from LadyCarpathian
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Huh??? And I say again, huh??? Most confusing. For those of us sitting in the dumbass section, what exactly are the crossovers???? The only ones I recognize are Pitch Black and Buffy. For the good news, the writing is excellent and intriguing. Hope to understand more soon.
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from WhiteWolf
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2162? Okey, I was thinking that Pitch Black was at least a fewy hunderds more of years, maybe even a few thousends years in the future.
Comments from author:
Remember, I have actually placed this in the Traveller universe. Pitch Black/tCoR is set within that universe. The beauty of that is, I can therefore set the timeframe for whenever I want and make it more manageable from a writing standpoint. It can be tricky when you are taking a 'verse set pretty much Present-Day and try to cross it with one set in the future. That's why I did the crossovers the way that I did. And it also makes things easier for the readers to relate to as well! :-)
However, I hope that you are enjoying it all, at any rate. I'm having a blast writing this one. Much more fun than my other pieces that I have written in the past. I hope you continue to read and review. It keeps me motivated! :-)
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from boo
Review:
please continue
Review By [boo] • Date [13 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Darkness is a Friend of Mine" from Nightscream
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Please stop teasing us and get them to met up already! Its killn' me! I love this fic but the chapters are so short. I cant wait for the main characters to met up.