Review of chapter "Interlude" from Markelo
I really like the idea of Harry and Dawn being a couple. They would make a cute couple.
Review By [Markelo
] • Date [11 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from penguinsinlove
Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story. I like the slow build-up of Harry and Dawn's relationship. I like that Hermonie is a bit bothered by all this Slayer business. And the wand bit was fun. A chimera was unexpected for a core. And I like the secretive line. You have seemed to stay in character for most of it. (Harry is not as rage-filled and angsty as he seems in the books, but I can't say I mind. We'll just chalk it up to Dawn - to having someone outside of the situation to talk to about it.) Just wanted to let you know I like this story, keep up the good work!
Review By [penguinsinlove
] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from DemonChildeKyra
I am so loving this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I love how awkward and shy Harry gets about Dawn, it's so adorable! Anyway, I love it so far and can't wait for more!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra
] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Keshkreature
Wow, I love your story. Harry trying to hint to Dawn about magic and then having to get rescued by her sister was great. I was thinking in the fight when she grabbed Harry's wand that maybe she had magic and didn't get a letter because she didn't exist at the time. If the monks made it retroactive and put her in school, that would just call more attention to her and get her away from Buffy. Sorta curious if that's what's gonna happen, especially now that Hermiony keeps harping on why Dawn didn't get a letter. I would love to see more of this story.
Review By [Keshkreature
] • Date [28 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from fairybloom
This story is really good. Please update soon. Pretty please.
Review By [fairybloom
] • Date [14 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Dawnie2
I'm sorry to hear about your dad dying losing a family member so important must be horrid. I for one love your story and I'm anxious to read the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work and again I'm sorry for your loss.
Review By [Dawnie2
] • Date [26 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Akalea
I'm really sorry to hear about what you've been through recently, it would be horrible. But I'm glad to see you've updated, I really do like this story and it's so well written :)
Review By [Akalea
] • Date [23 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from EricThorsen
Interesting interlude... also, a new and interesting way of dealing with the meeting... keep it up.
Review By [EricThorsen
] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from frogstompinfun
well I think it is worth the wait cause it is a damngood story......cant wait till Dawnie gets to Hogs!!! I think there should be much kickage-in-the-arse od Draco and his cronies Urghh I hate him!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope there is more soon, Phantom
Review By [frogstompinfun
] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Naitch
Always liked this story, glad it got updated. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [Naitch
] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Crayshack
Review By [Crayshack
] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Keys, Books and Wands" from BigRedX
This is one of my favourite stories, so I really hope that it hasn't been abandoned.
I love the way you've allowed the story to build slowly at it's own pace, and eveyone seems to be nicely in character. Particularly liked Arthur Weasley asking if the Vampire Slayer had stakes for hands!
Hope to read some more soon?
Comments from author:
No, this story hasen't been abandoned, I assue you.
I've just been going through some tough, personal things for a couple of months now, so the story had to be placed on hold. It wll continue again, and soon, that I do assure you.
Thank you so much for the kind review.
Review By [BigRedX
] • Date [30 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Keys, Books and Wands" from frogstompinfun
Love the premise ... Harry though seems a bit belligerent?? you mentioned that you were sticking with the HBP in the fact that Snape and Draco were mot going to reform and be good guys,, so that should be interesting!! When can there be more?? soon I hope so it's excellent so far and the Andrew speak thing had me in stitches!!
Review By [frogstompinfun
] • Date [21 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Keys, Books and Wands" from FicChick
I'm really enjoying this fic so far. Everyone is really in character and the pacing is excellent. So many crossovers just dump all the characters together in one chapter and start off with them just automatically explaining everything to each other and to the reader so that it scans like a nothing but a summary of both stories. You've managed to keep the ramp up to explanations believable and made the character interactions the most important part of the storyline while still building up what promises to be a very interesting plot line -- all without treating your readers like idiots who need to have everything explained and spelled out to them. This is a funny sweet and charming story that is doing a really good job of blending the two universes while staying more withing cannon than most. I look forward to seeing what comes next and encourage you to continue this story through to completion.
Comments from author:
Thank you *so much* for this review. It's comments like this that really modivate me to push myself when I write, and try and do even better.
I know the next part is taking a long time, but please be rest assured that this story hasn't been abandoned - real life has just been getting in the way.
Part of the reason this story was born was a love I had for BtVS/HP corssovers, but only finding maybe half a dozen that didn't, as you so aptly say, "insult the reader's intelegence." ;D
The next part should be up before the end of the year at least, and again, thank you so much for the great feedback. Take care!
Review By [FicChick
] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Keys, Books and Wands" from Akalea
This is still getting better and better. Great chapter, loved the descriptions. Can't wait to see more. :)
Review By [Akalea
] • Date [17 Aug 05] • Not Rated