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Review of chapter "Three" from Vld
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Well, he's an angry teenager! I mean, he lived for fourteen years with his spiteful aunt and uncle, not to mention his big fat whale of a cousin. And he spotted Voldy's return just a few weeks ago. Why should he like the fact that his Godfather has a girlfirend, or better, care that said Godfather hasn't had the chance to be with a woman in years? Ah, the joys of being a rebel teen... *smirks sarcastically*
Review By [Vld] • Date [21 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from zili
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I like it but the way your characterizing Harry makes me want to smack him
Comments from author:
I understand the sentiment exactly, but that was a bit of the goal. Harry always struck me as being so serious- having a mild case of teenage rebellion/resentfulness seems more natural that fighting dark lords and lightens the situation a little. But don't worry- he gets better!
Review By [zili] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from WhiteWolf
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I like it. I'm sure Harry can't stay mean and angry at Willow for long. Who can? Only if she was the Vampire or Dark Willow, but otherwise it is impossible.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from Kneazles
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Very nice... it really helped me cheer up after I froze up during my speech assignment today. Thanks for the laugh, and I can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from VillageOrchid
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This has been very cute so far. The chapters are a bit short, like scenes and instances, but you did post *three* - thank you!
My thanks for sharing the story. I'm curious if Willow's store is a branch of research for the new watchers council or something else.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from Kneazles
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lol very cute... poor Harry, will he ever learn that sometimes sticking your nose into things is not the way to go?
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from Vld
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Wow! Harry IS being a prat, isn't he?
Comments from author:
I suppose he is being a bit of a brat, but I am trying to make it seem comical and also show the difference between his thought of Willow and how she actually is when he meets her...Is that giving to much away? Oops
Review By [Vld] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the family" from Jinky
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Love it!!!!!!! Can't wait to see more!
Review By [Jinky] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the family" from NoLifeKing
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Hehheh! Nice and funny begin of the story! :-)
I look forward where this will go!
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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