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Review of chapter "Five" from whoadreambig
Review:
So, this story hasn't been updated in over a year, BUT I'm hoping that you're still interested in it and if I leave review you'll be inspired to update.

I absolutely love this fic. Please post something, *anything*, soon! :D
Comments from author:
Just between you, me and the popsicle stand, I'm planning an update on this soon. Not sure what I'll do with it (it's been insanely long, you're right) but it's in the works
Review By [whoadreambig] • Date [20 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from Coldhands
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Cool, sweet, and very believable. I hope you continue.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [20 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from Arjai
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Please do not abandon this story!!! There is a tenderness in this that other Anita-verse tales are missing. Dawn needs a Nathaniel in her life, someone who cares for her even from afar. They of course will need to eventually meet. They would do one another good, she needs family! she is not a child anymore, and she is not a woman yet. That is a rough time for someone, male or female, to go through even if they have a mother, a father, and siblings. She has nothing. "Glinda", and "Tinkerbell" have each other. Spike is alone but he is also an ancient. Maybe he could ask permission to bring Dawnie to St. Louis for a visit. That could be the beginning of a whole new tale!
Review By [Arjai] • Date [20 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from Keshkreature
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aww, that's so sweet. I'd love to see Dawn meet Jason, although I'm not sure she'd be able to speak if she met him in person. Will they find out about Buffy? It's painful to hear them talking about her like that, even though they don't know any better. Please update again soon!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [12 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from ContessaD
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Wow, I love seeing Dawn have someone to talk to who isn't involved with everything in Sunnydale and it's heartbreaking to watch her grieve. We never really got a chance to see that. I hope you write more because it's wonderful. :)
Review By [ContessaD] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from FireFox
Review:
eehh I never saw this before. Awe I LOVE how you write Nathaniel. It amazes me, it really do how well you get him down on..paper(screen).
Review By [FireFox] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from whoadreambig
Review:
I love this story. I hope you didn't abandon it - because it has such great potential. I can't wait for more Dawn/Nathaniel interaction (either through the letters or personally). Are you planning on taking this through Season 7? Is Buffy going to come back? Is Nathaniel going to go to Sunnydale or is Dawn going to go to St. Louis? :D I adore this story - just in case you didn't notice. I'm hanging on the edge of my seat for more. Cheers!
Review By [whoadreambig] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from purrfus
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Whatever it was that Obituary lacked that I couldn't put my finger on, isn't a problem here. Interesting mixture of BtVS & AB, well paced and presented. Set up tracking to catch the next update.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from (Past Donor)Aynot
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I just found and read this story (and it's prequel); it is a seriously well written, angst laced, good read. I will be waiting for more of this story with very little patience and how much longer is it going to take for the Next Part, it has already been a year since the last part. Just to reiterate, I truly did enjoy this story, so more, soon!!! ....oh, yeah... Please!
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [29 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Sad yet somehow funny. I hope you plan to update it sometime.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [5 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from TaiYoukai
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Great story. Kinda confusing at some parts and not as good as Inevitable, but great nonetheless!!!

TaiYoukai
Review By [TaiYoukai] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from (Past Donor)Deanie
Review:
I love this... it's a very unique take on the relationship between the Anitaverse characters and the Buffyverse ones... makes me wonder what would have happened if Nathaniel (and his brother) had been raised with the Summers.

It's been a long time since you updated. I know you've got a million WIPs, but are you planning on updating this again? It's a wonderful story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [5 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five" from skychan
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This story I think is wonderful. It may seem to some like drivel without any plots or giant end of the world happenings but that I think is unnecessary and it works quite well.
Review By [skychan] • Date [15 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from spk
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WOW! Now I've heard people say that you can die from sex, but never have I imagined that you could be sent home to a mystical heaven during sex. :) Great job. Very ingenious way to get Legolas home. Can't wait to see Willow's reactions to Valar. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [14 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five" from onlimain
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I like this chapter. I'm hoping they meet soon, but it seems like it might just be letters for now, which is okay. If you go according to the timeline, then Anita and Nathaniel won't have time to find out that Buffy is really dead. If the Scoobies resurrect her, there wouldn't be any real reason to tell them she had died. (Until, of course, Nathaniel and the sisters become close enough.) But I don't know how Anita would feel about 4 people with no experience in raising the dead, raising the dead. I'm not sure it would sit too well with her. And how will Nathaniel react to finding out Buffy was a Slayer? Or about Dawn's origins? I look forward to the next chapter.

What about 'Candlelight?' Will that be updated any time soon? Or will you wait until your other stories are finished?
Review By [onlimain] • Date [21 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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