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Review of chapter "The Shark" from banner
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Wonderful, as always.
This one really felt like a "Pretender" episode. I love the characterizations, as well. Terrific.

(And *great* job picking on Miss Parker)
Review By [banner] • Date [2 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Shark" from renelf
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Since there is going to be absolutely no sequel to this story I just wanted to say thanks for an excellent tale. It read like a really good episode of The Pretender. The Buffy and NCISverses meshed in nicely. I'm a little concerned about what Jarod did with all Miss Parker's beautiful designer shoes, they must be worth a fortune.
Review By [renelf] • Date [30 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Shark" from dulcinea
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Fabulous, fabulous story! It read just like a pretender episode, with all the cat and mouse games and ridiculous clues. Marvelous job!
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [30 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Shark" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [29 Apr 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Shark" from raven
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Now that was enjoyable. And you even brought out one of my favorite tv boyfriends. I don't watch NCIS much but it seemed like they caught on a little quick. Is there a history of people not being who they say they are on that show? That would explain the early questions and discovery. Otherwise, you did a lovely job on the half-mute Oz and everything made sense. If you'll excuse me, I have a sudden urge to purchase sneakers...
Review By [raven] • Date [29 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Shark" from cwolf
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I don't have any complaints about the no sequel part. Though, I did think that my "In His Lady's Service" would never have a sequel, yet here I am working on number 3. So... if you ever decide some year down the road to make one, I'll be glad to read and review.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [29 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Eel" from Bugeyedmonster
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Oz titled his head. “Miss Parker would never wear those pants.”

LOL!

Too funny! More please? I just love the idea of Jarod 'pretending' to be Ms Parker.

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Eel" from cwolf
Review:
It makes sense that Jarod would accept magic easily. He's trained to adapt. That and the fact that he's always tried to experience things that he never got to as a child
Review By [cwolf] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Eel" from NoLifeKing
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Now that Jarod knows about magic, will he get to know about Oz being a werewolf?
Will he meet Ms. Parker in his Ms. Parker disguise? *evilgrin*
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Top of the Food Chain" from NoLifeKing
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Great start. Oz sentences are short enough for him. ;-)
I really like Pretender and can't await how this will continue.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [27 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Squirrel-fish" from Dreamweaver
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Oooohhhh! I like this one too! Dammit, what is it with me recently? Last month or so been reading a LOT of Btvs/CIS-type show fics. Long as it makes some kind of sense and is well-written seems to be okay with me.......
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Squirrel-fish" from CPTSkip
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Wow! I wish for a million dollars. ... Ok, that didn't work, but thanks for the excedingly rapid update. Any more already written? I think the Gunny is going to find a were-Oz all over his furry butt real soon now. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Top of the Food Chain" from CPTSkip
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Hoo-rah! Great start and I really want to read more. Please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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