Good chapter, but you made a couple of storyline errors. The bio teachers body was found minus the head and they never found it. The students didn't get shot during the Valentine episode, it was a teacher shot by the janitor. Good work, otherwise.
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Drat. I hate it when I make continuity errors. At least they were all deaths in the same season instead of an eighty year age change for a major character....
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
It's alive........Alive i tell you!!! Muhahahahaha!!!! And even better it got updated too. I love you.
Ok just a few questions..
A) Does the rest of marvel excist and if so why not have Charlie ask Reed for a favor and have the Human Torch tutor Xander and simular powered people.
B) Will the whole Pyro/Faith thing, keep 'em from going bad or will they go bad together?
C) Speaking of the Torch, is Xander a green coloured mutant version of him?
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Glad to brighten your day. In order.....
A) Probably, but there is a long established minimal communication and cooperation between the X-folks and everybody else. There is also the whole idea that mutants would be better for teaching mutants how to use their powers (nevermind that one of the Fantastic Four - who are NOT mutants - may have a very similar power...)
B) that remains to be seen. There is also now the possibility that they could be bad influences on each other. Including the idea that should they form a strong emotional connection, what happens if Faith the Slayer is killed? Or even just severely wounded? In the short term, this will give Faith some friends and allies, people who would not be afraid of her superhuman strength and reflexes.
C) I wasn't picturing Xander as anywhere near that powerful just now, though there is a definite similarity in the nature of their abilities. Of course, Marvel is full of people who have their power grow over time.
Review By [Deamondeathstone] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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