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Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from (Past Donor)elementalv
Review:
[whines] But where's the rest? I've waited soooooooo long for this...
Comments from author:
You and me both. I can't believe this has taken me nearly two years to actually finish. It was killing me, sad thing that it was, sitting there half finished. I feel much better now.
Review By [(Past Donor)elementalv] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from Vld
Review:
That sounds promising. I liked that.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Vld] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from CPTSkip
Review:
I think this is an excellent start to a new story. I liked your rational for crossing the Buffyverse with the Anitaverse. I really look forward to more of this story. Also, thanks for bringing Joyce back in this new universe.
Comments from author:
I missed Joyce. One of the advantages of playing around with universes like this is I really can fix the 'mistakes' I saw in the show. THe loss of Joyce was one of them.

This story is 95% done, so I'll update it every day or two until it's done, like I did for A Road Less Traveled

Thanks!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from WhiteWolf
Review:
A nice start, not bad. I'm thinking that Dawn might not tell anybody about her wish, but on the other hand. Vengence Wishes never turn out right.
Comments from author:
Vengeance wishes never turn out perfectly- at least not for the wisher. Dawn's got some unnerving revelations coming up.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from Calex
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Wow. It was a brilliant introduction to the story, and I could see in my head that very episode and imagine what would happen, if Dawn was indeed thrust into such circumstances. Disconcerting, to say the least, and I love the parallels you drew between the world, so that it would have been even more disconcerting to Dawn, how her world and the world at St. Louis had blended so well. And that last bit, where Dawn finds out that her mother was still alive. That would have been a painful mix of disbelief, hope, excitement, happiness and every other emotion under the sun. Painful yet happy at the same time, especially as Dawn probably knows that things couldn't be kept like that, and that her mother would once more be dead to her.

Very well done, her confusion and her anxiety was palpable, and you wrote her thoughts very well, letting the reader delve into the mind of a teenager (not that it's too hard in my case, still being a teenager *grin*). Can't wait to read more of this.
Comments from author:
Well, being a teenager wasn't all that long ago for me either, what, seven years? But I'm glad it worked. Dawn's got a tough decision in front of her. I certainly wouldn't want to be stuck in her place right about now.

Thanks!
Review By [Calex] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from echo
Review:
Wow. I'm really excited about this. What a terrific start. And I love Kit being there. Excellent.
Comments from author:
I love Kit too. She gets far too little air time.
Review By [echo] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from Kaz
Review:
Oooh very interesting beginning. I like her wish too. *snerk* Quite amusing. Great job. I'm definitely looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks! It was fun to write. I've been planning this off and on for two years and I'm thrilled to have finally gotten off my duff and written it.
Review By [Kaz] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from Kneazles
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This is a very intresting start... I really am looking forward to see where you take it.
Comments from author:
THanks! It is fun to write.
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
Oh. this sounds like a great start. Please continue.
Comments from author:
Most definitely. Stay tuned!
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Sunrise" from (Past Donor)Mhalachai
Review:
You know I love it! Your Dawn and her realization of what she's done is great. And talk about cliff-hangers. *g*
Comments from author:
Yes, well, cliff-hangers are fun. YOu should talk, you've got them all over the place!

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Review By [(Past Donor)Mhalachai] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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