it seems like I just started reading this a bit ago. It went by so fast, and was such a rush - stopping was almost painful. I hope your real life improves - selfishly because I want more story - but also because the out ok work sucks.
Comments from author:
I'm back, and the next chappy is with the beta now.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Just started reading but wow. I was a little surprised that Dawn just let all the Key stuff out with A & S in the room. Is that all about werewolf pack politics? Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Comments from author:
Yep. If she didn't tell them and it came out later, it would have looked like she lied. She was worried about that because the pack from Cleveland wouldn't accept her.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Good story so far. I can't wait until Spike and Faith meet Jean Claude, I'm hoping Ripper might come out to play if he tries any power trips. Thanks for making Anita not too much of a bitch, she's so easy to demonize (if that's a word and the correct spelling). I also like Dawn and Richards relationship so far, a bit fairy tale like, but at least they're not immediately getting groiny. The P.O.V.s at the start of every chapter are different but I appreciate the labels, even though you do a good job of establishing which character it is without the labels. I'll be waiting for more, thanks for the story so far.
Comments from author:
There are alot of Anita bash fics out there. They make her out to be this incredible bitch who hates everyone. I see her as a realist who has learned the hard way that you can't trust people until you have a reason. As for Dawn and Richard, I never understood fics where people meet in chapter one and hit the sheets in chapter two. A real relationship takes time to know each other before getting horizontal. More is comeing soon, thanks for reading.
Review By [Maebelle] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Thanks for the great update. I'm looking forward to Spike/Jean-Claude meeting and how Anita is going to react to Dawn, Faith and the Council..I'm sorry to hear about your job loss. Hopefully things will get better soon for you.
*cackling hysterically* I'm picturing the look on Spike's face while thinking through the myriad things that boyfriends and girlfriends do, and betting he's focusing on the things HE would do if he were the boyfriend.
If Spike and Richard don't kill each other, it'll be a miracle.
Review By [Trace] • Date [5 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Excellent chapter! SO faith like. tee hee yet grrr. Go with the smoochies. Can't wait to see whathappens at the airport. If D thought the shovel speech from Xan was bad, Giles and Spike......G,G,G,G. Please write more soon.
Comments from author:
Will be getting to Giles and Spike hopefully by the end of the next chapter, but first Dawn has some 'splainin to do. ;)
Review By [boo] • Date [26 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I just read this through and I love it! I'm hoping Spike and Buffy are a couple back in Cleavland. You haven't said anything to the effect that they weren't, and the Slayer's boyfriend/master of cleavland would be awesome. Plus after being with Buffy so long Spike will just look at Anita funny everytime she blows her top :)
Love how you're writing Faith and Xander too!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it, but Buffy/Spike is not gonna happen. Not here. The only reasonable explaination I can come up with for it happening in cannon is Post Tramatic Stress or something. Sorry, but the thought of Spuffy makes me shudder. But, since Buffy most likely won't be showing up, its really a non issue anyway. :-)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [26 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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