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Review of chapter "A Crystal Moon" from (Past Donor)elementalv
Review:
This is an interesting story, and I'm looking forward to seeing who ends up in the Labyrinth and how they fare. My only quibble is that Dawn and Toby feel a bit sueish/stuish with their ability to attract the positive attention of such big names in the theater. I can't help but wonder if the story would work just as well if they weren't at the top of their class.

It's only a quibble, however. You're a good writer, and you're telling an engaging story, which means you're ahead of at least 90% of the fanfic writers out there. Again, I'm looking forward to reading more of this 'verse.
Comments from author:
That's a fair criticism. I think that the theatre will become less important as the story progresses, but I haven't worked out all the details yet so I can't be sure. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)elementalv] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Crystal Moon" from firechild
Review:
wow, ask and you shall receive, huh? ^_^ a little too short for my great hunger for this fic, but satisfying all the same. i still don't understand some of the things with cassie's webpage, but i guess everthing will be explained in due time! keep it up!
Comments from author:
All shall be revealed...eventually.
Review By [firechild] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hazy Shade of Winter" from firechild
Review:
i love this fic! it's really like nothing i've seen before! please update now that things are getting so good!
Comments from author:
Cries for updates will always be answered. Sometimes I just need a little extra motivation.
Review By [firechild] • Date [22 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hazy Shade of Winter" from Firelover
Review:
YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!! Doing the happy dance. I love it. Absolutely smashing. On the edge of my seat can't wait to see what happens next. You are a fantastic writer. May many many happy dreams of your favorite charater come to you in all full blown glory. Please continue. Pretty please with gooey homebaked goodness on top.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I find most of my motivation for this story in listening to the Labyrinth soundtrack and reading about the London theatre scene. I hope to update more often from now on.
Review By [Firelover] • Date [25 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Valentine Evenings" from Firelover
Review:
I love this! Oh My God! Please continue. I love the way you took an unknown charater like toby and gave him such reality. I love the mixture of famous people and actually events and places and added them into the Buffyverse. Please continue this beautiful fic. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks. I'm glad someone's not only reading but enjoying. I must give credit where credit is due. I'm not the first to write Toby as an adult, I came across him in a short fic called Goblin Talk by Houses. Alan Rickman is actually one of the chairmen of RADA and Kevin Spacey does run the Old Vic theatre in London. I threw in Emma Thompson because I love her and think she'd be a wonderful person to know. Expect Ken Branagh and Steven Fry to pop up as well. One of my lecturers went to Cambridge with Emma, Alan and Steven and they're all great friends. I'm a little obsessed with this story so there should be regular updates. Thanks again.
Review By [Firelover] • Date [30 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Underground" from Jess2
Review:
ooooooo. This is interesting. I've never read any kind of Lab/BtvS fic that had Toby in it. Especially all grown up. I'm totally intrigued. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm writing this story because I like it and I didn't think anyone else was reading it. I'm glad someone else is.
Review By [Jess2] • Date [28 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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