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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Interesting story, interesting ideas and well written. Can't wait to see more of this one.

Good work here!

Tracey
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply Tracey! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story!

Snowie:)
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Kaede
Review:
I really like the mature Harry in this story. Good work!
Please update soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're enjoying the more mature Harry;) Thanks for the reply!

Snowie:)
Review By [Kaede] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from YellowRoses
Review:
This was a great story, It's just to bad you seem to have abandoned it. Oh well, good ideas, you should keep working on it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you like the story. And I actually have not abandoned it. Things have just been a bit crazy along with crazy writers block. The next chapter is on page 28, and will hopefully be posted soon! Thanks again for the reply!

Snowie
Review By [YellowRoses] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Valandar
Review:
Aww, man, too bad this story seems to be abandoned. It starts off quite well, and could easily develop into a nicely complex plot and such... BTW, the B/X pairing... here's hoping. :) But if B/X doesn't work out, I suggest a Veela for Xander, he DOES always tend to get the nonhumans. Assuming you ever get back to this story, of course.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply Valandar! I'm actually working on the next chapter right now. I've had crazy writer's block for a while, but it's getting a lot better...;) LOL! The plan is to try the B/X pairing, but I'm not sure if it'll work... but we'll see... Thanks again for the reply!

Snowie
Review By [Valandar] • Date [29 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice work.
Comments from author:
Thank you:)

Snowie
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Wow! So fun. Well, not all fun, but I did have a smile on my face for most of it. I liked Malfoy and Harry especially. I just wish Harry could be like this in the books. It seems like this is a natural progression for someone who's going to defeat Voldemort, you know?

You know you're doing something right when your readers are thinking that your 30+ page chapter was too short.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply AnnOfMidnight! I'm glad that you like the story so far. Hmm, what part wasn't fun? LOL! I really enjoyed that Harry/Malfoy scene myself. They're fun to write. Snarky and distrustful of each other...It's great! And I'm afraid that no amount of good deeds or life savage is going to change *that* relationship much;) As for my Harry/book Harry... I'm really hoping that Harry will be more take charge and in control of his own destiny in book seven... I think it's necessary...
As for the length... well I *guess* I could aim for 35... but that might be *really* pushing it! hehehe! Thanks again for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [25 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Spy of Slytherin" from JUSTME
Review:
This is a GREAT story! I really like how you are writing Harry and his take charge attitude.
Please post more soon :)

Thanks for the story!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply JustMe. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and Harry's attitude. I thought that it was about time for his to take charge... More soon to come...
Thanks again for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [JUSTME] • Date [24 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from anabellatrix
Review:
Am loving this story! Like how you have made Harry a lot more focused and mature as sometimes its frustrating to read the books or other fanfic where he is still written as incapable of an ordered plan and more interested in other things than defeating Voldemort. Its also good to see the scoobies not being completely over the top and taking over or immediatley falling for a Harry Potter character. Can't wait to see how this turns out!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply anabellatrix! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Oh, Harry's going to be quite focused in this story. There will be plans, scheming and a few dangerous plots...;) LOL! Yeah, I don't like it when the Scoobies totally take over the battle. I just want them to help, cause in the end it all has to come down to Harry... at least in my opinion...
Thanks again for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [anabellatrix] • Date [18 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
Brilliant, a very believable melding of the Buffyverse with Harry Potter. I look forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply! I'm glad that you like how the two worlds are coming together. I really wanted it to be believeable... without *too* many out there coincidences...;) LOL! Thanks again for the reply~
Snowie:)
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [18 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)Kiara
Review:
Great chapter- i think the whole legal immunity thing's gonna open loads of windows!
I've gotta say that I'm with you in the shock and denial of HP&theHBP- how could they do that?!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply Kiara! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. And the legal immunity thing will make some things a bit easier... but not everything...;) As for HBP, denial is the only way to go! lmao! Thanks again!
Snowie:)
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [18 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Wow, big set up. Enjoying your storytelling so far. Looking forward to seeing how you play it out. Perhaps a few more Willow scenes so we know she's in book heaven at the Black Mansion -- perhaps getting some of the other books via floo on loan from Hogwart's library? Hard to see Wilow not doing something -- responsible -- and she can't help out with the council or slayer findage.. or can she?

So I take it you've decided that while Snape works for "good" he's unredeamably ill tempered to all... not just young students?
Comments from author:
Hi Rachel! I'm glat that you're enjoying the story so far! There will be more Willow in future chapters and certainly more books will be involved! She is Willow, after all. And she'll be doing something very resposible that doesn't involve the council or slayers. I'm just trying to get everything fully set up at the moment. Things will settle down a bit in a few chapters time and there will be more character development as everyone figures out their places in the upcoming saga...
As for Snape... well, since I can't recall off the top of my head a *single* time when he's been pleasant (ie *not* ill-tempered (or as Willow might put it, 'non-scowl-y')) towards, well anyone... I'd have to say, yeah, that's my take on him;) LOL! Plus, not really feeling too charitable towards the guy at the moment... Still, he'll have his moments...;)
Thanks for the reply!
Snowie
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jul 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Naitch
Review:
Well, despite your doubts, I thought this was another excellent chapter. I can't wait to see where you are going with this story. Especially, as we all have a particularly long wait ahead of us for Book 7. As for denial- I still don't know what to think. And out of curiosity, as one fan-fic writer to another, will the events of Book 6 impact your story at all, ie character evelopment-wise?

Updatge soon! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Hi Naitch! Thanks for the reply! And I have to say 'phew!' I'm glad it wasn't so bad:) Yeah, not really looking forward to the wait, hense the denial. As for whether book six will effect this story... well, I can't say that it won't. I read it, so it's bound to have some effect... but at the moment it won't directly effect any of the major plot points that I have planned. As for character development, I don't know, some of it might bleed over, but I also might go in whole other directions. It's hard to tell at this point...
Thanks for reading!
Snowie:)
Review By [Naitch] • Date [17 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm really enjoying the story so far. The only part that confuses me is the time of night that Wilow, Faith and Buffy made their patrol. It might not have even been after dark if it is still the summer... if it were... it might not have just been dinner time at the mansion. Enjoying the characterization so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply Rachel. As for the patrolling/dinner thing... well, I noticed the same thing *after* I'd posted it, but decided to leave it alone since no one had mentioned it (before you). I have since decided that it was an overcast evening with lots of fog so they went out early enough for it to all work out... (*sigh* See, that's what I get for switching things around and missing a vital point in the editing process. Sorry!)
Anyway, thanks for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from kiwi
Review:
excellent long chapter. ditto on living in denial.... it's all about the fanfiction until the 7th book comes out. great writing! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply Kiwi! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm all for denial. I think in this case it's totally the way to go...;) Thanks again!
Snowie:)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [17 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Naitch
Review:
I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this fic, and can't wait to read more. You have an excellent writing style, your characters are all spot-on, and your story is very engaging. Just some questions on your pairings- Maybe it's because we haven't seen any real interaction, but Dawn-Fred? I could see a Dawn-Draco, after this chapter, though that probably wouldn't work, unless Dawn goes to Hogwarts.

Anyways, great chapter, can't wait to read more.

-Naitch
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the reply Naitch! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story... and I must say that I'm relieved that people think I'm getting the character's right. That's really important to me and I always have this fear that I might be getting something wrong!
As far as pairing go, well, looking back on what I have posted, I can see how the Fred/Dawn thing would seem to be coming out of left field... But based on what I have written already, well, it makes a lot more sense... (And sometimes I forget that everyone else can't see what I have swirling around in my head! LOL!)
Anyway, I have quite a bit of a number of future chapters written, and there are some scenes there involving Fred and Dawn and I found that I really like the two of them together... I hope that your question. As for Dawn/Draco, well, there's a lot standing in the way of that, as will be demonstrated in coming chapters...;)
Thanks again for the reply!
Snowie
Review By [Naitch] • Date [10 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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