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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kiwi
Review:
yay! another excellent chapter. glad that harry isn't such a brat anymore. wat about a dawn/draco pairing? i think that would be nice since he did save her and all.... just my input. great chapter! can't wait for more! :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter... And that you're liking non brat Harry;) As for Draco/Dawn... well, I'm not saying no... but as you'll see in future chapters, there won't really be an opportunity for that for a while... Thanks for the reply!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [10 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ezmerelda
Review:
What? No jokes about the Slayers mistaking Severus for a vampire? Have you no regard for HP/BtVS cliches? :) Just kidding, of course. I'm actually a little tired of reading that.

Nice set up, I can't wait to see what prompts Harry to move into his new apartment earlier than he'd anticipated.

Thanks for writing! ~"~
Comments from author:
Oh damn! The Snape/Vampire joke! I knew I was forgetting something! LOL! I hope this doesn't mean that I get kicked out of the club...;) Nope, no Snape as a vampire, slayers almost staking him scene... but look forward to Willow's hate...hate relationship with him... I think it's going to be quite hilarious... but then, I always amuse myself... hehehe.
I'm glad that you liked the chapter!
Oh and Harry's not actually going to be moving into the apartment, but it will come in very handy in the next chapter or so...
Thanks for reading! And replying!
Snowie:)
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I like this. Harry's not too whiney/pissy. An interesting pairing would be Faith/Snape. I have yet to see this one yet and it's just off-the-wall to work! Of course Faith/Harry would be different too. IMOHO. Hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Yeah, Harry needed to let go of the whiney/pissy thing... and I think that everyone is going to be grateful for that... Of course, I hope you'll excuse him if he uses that part of himself every now and again...;)
Yeah, I don't think I could subject Faith to Snape... I like her too much... As for Harry/Faith... now that is interesting... Hold up! Creative juices flowing...;)
I'm hoping to have more out by the end of the week. The next chapter's about halfway done...
Thanks again for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kiwi
Review:
this keeps getting better and better. well written so far! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply! I'm glad that you like it so far!
Snowie:)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [27 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Spy of Slytherin" from Ezmerelda
Review:
This story is off to an interesting start. If you think this prologue is uninteresting, I can't wait to see what you pull on us in later chapters! Anticipation has been built. Thanks for writing! ~"~
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the prologue and thought that it was interesting. My main concern was that I was throwing out so much background and trying to do it in as little time as possible... I'm glad it came off okay! Hopefully the next chapter will be out tomorrow or Friday! Thanks for the reply!

Snowie:)
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [20 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Spy of Slytherin" from (Past Donor)Kiara
Review:
Nice start. No clue of who the Slytherin Spy is yet- could be Malfoy, Blaise, PAnsy anyone!
I like the idea of a Harry / Dawn pairing. The way you're writing Harry seems like he'd have quite a lot in common with cannon-Dawn.
Kiara xx
Comments from author:
Hi Kiara! Thanks for the reply! Hmm, can't count that as a guess... though you brought out the usual suspects... (We all know that Crabbe and Goyle aren't smart enough;)) So we have a vote for Harry/Dawn.... I'm certainly considering it... at some point...;) Thanks again for the reply!

Snowie:)
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [20 Jun 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Spy of Slytherin" from Dreamweaver
Review:
Gee. An accountant? I hope he's just telling people that and not actually planning to get a job as one. I don't think he's got the foggiest idea what all actually goes into accounting.
Comments from author:
LMAO! Sorry to laugh, but for some reason, I find it hilarious that out of everything in the chapter, you picked out the accountant line... Explanation: It was part of the glamour, his alias so to speak. There were two reason's that I picked accountant, neither of which has anything to do with Harry ever considering becoming one. First reason: Absolutely, boringly normal job, one that Vernon Dursley himself would approve of. No supernatural flags to go up... Second, in the first book when Harry asks Ron if everyone in his family is magical, he mentions his mother's second cousin, who's "an accountant, but we never talk about him."
I couldn't resist...;)
Thanks for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [20 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Spy of Slytherin" from Laith
Review:
good job.

I like where this looks to be heading.

keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reply! I'm glad you enjoyed the prologue. Next chapter should be out soon!

Snowie:)
Review By [Laith] • Date [20 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Potter and the Spy of Slytherin" from BkwrmDancer
Review:
This is a promising start, I look forward to more. yay with the Ron Hermione pairing, I don't know about Harry, either Ginny or Dawn is a favorite of mine. I'm also a big fan of Buffy/Charlie or Bill pairings, also the Buffy/Oliver pairings, so yeah those are my suggestions to take and do what you choose with. Like I said promising begining, I like that you're making Harry less pissy (thank God!!), and I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you liked it! I had to go with the Ron/Hermione pairing. I can't really picture either one ending up with anyone else... As far as Harry goes... Dawn or Ginny... Yes;) LOL! There is going to be a lot of... how should I put this? Let's just say that I plan to have a lot of fun playing with the pairings. (I'll tell you now, though, mention the one you end up wanting the most and mention it often... Occasionally I can be swayed;)) And again, about Harry, if you notice him getting all pissy, please let me know and I will definitely make him tone it down! lol!;)
I hope to have chapter one out tomorrow or Friday...
Thanks for the reply!
Snowie:)
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [20 Jun 05] • Not Rated
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