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Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from (Past Donor)Deanie
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I think this is a wonderful story, very creative... I can totally believe that the 'dead' Cordelia is manipulating things from her ascended plane of existence.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [17 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from harpy
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Somehow my review has been lost. Essentially I complimented you on your writing ;). I love your characterisations. I don't know the Veronica Mars series, but to read your stuff one doesn't have to, since it's so very good. Compliments.
Review By [harpy] • Date [22 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from AnneHedonia
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Man, I've been meaning to leave you a review for a while, but couldn't get the webpage to work. Really excellent fic - tightly plotted, great characterization, great interweaving of the two worlds. I loved how close and loyal Veronica and her dad were, and how they were believably skeptical, but then quick to get up to speed once the new stuff was proven to them. It seemed very much in character that they wouldn't stay amazed long, and would quickly start using the new tools to their advantage. I really ate up this fic, couldn't get to the next chapter fast enough. ;) Keep it up. - Anne
Review By [AnneHedonia] • Date [26 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from (Past Donor)boo
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Wha an awesome story. I really love this. I'm hoping that you'll write more. I think you got down the voices of btvs and veronica mars just right. please do a sequel.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [26 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from manic
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That was great! I really enjoyed this fic. It completely went over my head that Vi had been killing humans. I liked how you handled the battle and their involvement in LA. I've liked every story of yours i've had a chance to read. Thanks for sharing with us.
Review By [manic] • Date [26 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from CPTSkip
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Sweet, sweet story. I am still amazed at how well you captured Veronica's voice and I loved your plot. Nice job with Higher Being Cordy, also. I just hope there is a sequel to this neat story of yours.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XV and epilogue" from RemingtonSmythe
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Wasn't really expecting the end so soon, but I really liked this story. And I'd definately like to see some others based on it.
Review By [RemingtonSmythe] • Date [25 Aug 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XIV" from (Past Donor)boo
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love this:)
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [23 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XIV" from (Past Donor)Mari
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Um . . . for the most part, I've really been enjoying this. However--when did Willow take out Sunnydale? Vi was there--so she'd know. Shouldn't it be "Since we took out Sunnydale?" or "Since Spike took out Sunnydale?" And now Willow's connected to Angel's group? Is she making a special effort, or is just connected to absolutely everyone?
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [23 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XIII" from CPTSkip
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Whoa! I did not see this update coming. Nice bit of action and I love the fact that Lilah died again covered in vomit. I imagine this will not add a glowing recomendation to her Hellish resume. I love how you are characterizing all our heroes and really enjoy how you have captured Veronica's intelligence and ... quirky ... personality. I look forward to more fun and games.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XII" from Hecatonchires
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Heh. Vi was pretty cool.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [17 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XII" from TroyGuffey
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Love this story.

Cute bet between Xander and Harriet

But I like Vi MUCH better as her normal red-headed self.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [16 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XI" from (Past Donor)boo
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This is awesome. Please continue, I can't wait to find out what's going on.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [11 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XI" from YademosEbyam
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Sigh! I was really hoping that you would somehow get to the end of the story without giving Veronica and her father the 411 on the dark side of the Buffyverse, but I suppose it was not meant to be. Oh well, at least Cordy's explanation of the situation had some sort of logical consistency. (Too bad Cordy never joined her AI teammates at W&H; her talent for finding loopholes would have been useful in their contract division.) The big question here is "Now What?".
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [10 Aug 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Subcontractor - XI" from war
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great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [10 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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