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Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from CageFire
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Awesome story. Is there a sequel? This doesn't seem to be linked to a series on this site, so I guess I'll have to skim through your story list.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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A most satisfying read. An excellent elaboration on the intrusion of such power in the Buffy verse. Well done and thank you for writing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from kelvin
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just finished reading took me a couple of days, but it was a very well written story to me. I like how you combine the story lines of different shows. i was wondering are you going to use any more of Charmed? and the song Oz and Xander sang in the second to last chapter who sings them i just wish know ? so i can listen to them. Can't wait to start on book 2. keep up the good work
Review By [kelvin] • Date [6 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battling The Dark Side - Part Two" from kelvin
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you where right about the duel of the fates song while reading this chap. it made much better
Review By [kelvin] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from LordSia
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An incredible fic, from opening line to the last word.
I'm already salivating as I open the sequel...
Review By [LordSia] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from TexanFicWriter
Review:
I've read more than one Halloween fic involving the Star War universe, but I'd have to say that this particular story was definitely among the better written ones. There's a definite progression from one stage to another, and nothing seemed over the top. Well done.
Review By [TexanFicWriter] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Battles Won - Part Two" from jimk
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Looking ahead at the chapter headings I'm assuming this changes but so far it is a cool idea with a very weak story. Eight chapters in, Xander has the memories, knowledge and beginning powers of a full Jedi Knight. Oh, and nothing changes from canon!

Taking the time to grow and learn his powers is fine but changing nothing is unbelievable. For example in library during the death of Kendra, Xander has advanced warning of the vamps, he is a pretty damn good sword fighter, and everyone is armed and waiting for the vamps. He is highly effective with the sword during the fight. All this and yet somehow we have virtually the exact same outcome as canon. What's the point?

Great idea, well written, but so far, unfortunately boring.

I'll read a little more because the chapter headings seem to indicate the story will have some major changes. If it does then the only real mistake is the story has an incredibly long prologue.
Comments from author:
This was my first long story. No, it's not perfect. Very few things ever are. And yes, it stays close to canon at first. There's a reason for this - it's not a Xander-Sue, with Xander instantly becoming a Jedi. That would be too easy. There's also the fact that there are a lot of outside elements affecting Sunnydale. Kendra's death leads to Faith, one of the best characters in the series. Wolfram & Hart are great bad guys. Glory will always be coming to look for Faith. The Initiative will always meddle and be led by idiots.
Things do not however stick with canon. They will change as Xander grows. That's the whole point of this fic, and its sequel - the growth of Xander Harris into a true Jedi. Try and read more of it. You'll find that it does change quite radically, but hopefully without taking away too much from Buffy.
Review By [jimk] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just reread this story again and it was just as excellent as the last time I reread it.

::Starts rereading the sequel::

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The only questions that really matter
are the ones you ask yourself.
- Ursula Le Guin
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from JeremySensei
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Just read the whole thing. Took me a day or two to do so, but well worth it.

One of the best crossover stories I've read. Very good. I look forward to reading the next part and seeing how you tie up all the loose ends created over the course of the story thus far. Please do keep it up as one of the worst things in this world is an unfinished story. Keep at it and know that we all love what you're doing and enjoy reading your works.
Review By [JeremySensei] • Date [30 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Rune
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This is the first 9 rating I have given out. I almost made it a 10, but the story is not quite there, more like a 9.6 rating. Yes I know that rounds up to 10 in most cases but not for me. On a scale from 1 to 100 a ten would be 98-100. Tens are for perfection or at least very close.

Congrats anyway!

What could be better, some romance for Xander, further character development for Faith and Anya and Jonathan, some mention of the powers that be, and how they feel about the new Jedi. Little things like that, not really important but still things that could make it a better story.

Thanks for writing and posting it. :)
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from PhoenixFTW
Review:
Good story. Best Star Wars X-over I've read.
Review By [PhoenixFTW] • Date [14 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Leon
Review:
Good story.
Review By [Leon] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Six" from iamnuff
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do i spy the rite of Ash'Kente?

diskworld ftw.

also, i always wanted to know what would happen if you fired a real gun at a jedi. would the bullet melt and melted lead burn their face off?

also, blaster shotgun. the ultimate in anti lightsaber weaponry
Review By [iamnuff] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just reread this story again and it was just as excellent as the last time I read it.

::Starts rereading the sequel::

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We think in generalities, but we live in detail.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jedi Harris" from wingsofabutterfly
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ok, haven't even started reading the fic... just have to say, leonard of quirm! ha! yes! Discworld For The Win! love the fact that you've read Pratchett... makes me like you so much more, already. and now, to the fic!
Review By [wingsofabutterfly] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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