Review of chapter "Plumbing The Depths Of LA - Part One" from Harry
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This demon that Doyle took Xander to meet is not your typical demon, He has STANDARDS for the work he does! And the challenge that Xander has set for him intrigues him. I can hardly wait to see what the end results are.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraiths On The Mind - Part Two" from Harry
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Well, Xander succeeded where Luke failed. He faced and defeated the Dark Side. Now, to claim his prize.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraiths On The Mind - Part One" from Harry
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Only one thing to say in regard to what Xander was seeing and remembering of what Yoda told Luke: EMPIRE STRIKES BACK! *Starts humming Imperial March* JOIN WITH ME LUKE AND LEARN THE POWER OF THE DARK SIDE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Search - Part Two" from Harry
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Well, scratch the foursome that was holding Doyle hostage. Now, to deal with the Dark Side and get that cross.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Search - Part One" from Harry
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Well, Doyle has met Xander. Time to break him out of this mess, and take out the two vamps and the two idiot demons.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too Dry For Dagobah" from Harry
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So, you are brining in Doyle, eh? Lets see how this partial demon helps Xander out.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well, Red is up and out of the wheelchair, which is good. Now, its time for some training. SERIOUS training!
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Battles Won - Part Two" from Harry
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Well, Xander did his part to hold off Angelus until Buffy got there. And Giles is safe. Question is, what will B do now? Head out of town, or stay put and derail the forces of Snyder, the Sunnydale PD and the Mayor?
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Battles Won - Part One" from Harry
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Xander may have sent Drusilla running, but Angelus is another matter altogether. And that means dealing with the lion in his own den. You had best hope that the force IS strong with you Xander, because facing Angelus on his own home turf is NOT going to be easy!
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Vashti
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That was...wow. I've been reading this for the past week or so? I'm not sure, but I've been working on it. I have some issues with it (the britishisms kept throwing me out of the story since it was otherwise so "normal"), the biggest probably being that Xander sometimes felt like super!Xander or a GaryStu!Xander where he always saves the day, keeps them out of the worst of trouble, is super and never allows anyone (Faith, Amy) to fall to the darkness in their heart. However, Xan remained humble, happy to help, concerned about the group which kept mitigating my issues. So, overall...ecstatic that you posted a sequel that's even longer than this and unfinished! :D Thank you so much for posting this.
Review By [Vashti] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
*Starts humming Imperial March* I think that this is going to push Xander over to the Dark Side. Seeing Buffy knocked out cold, Kendra being drained, and Willow covered in Vamp Dust is just the thing to make his anger rage and have him tipped over to the Dark Side!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You need to make a choice Xander. Do you dust Angelus and not only prevent Angel from coming back and breaking Buffy's heart, or do you aid in helping with the spell. The time has come to make your choice lad.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Price of Winning" from Harry
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Harris, I KNOW you prefer the Jedi way to the Sith way, but with Angelus, you have no choice! You either take him out, or he TAKES YOU OUT! Running is not a option,
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
