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Review of chapter "Taking The Test - Part Two" from VillageOrchid
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I remember this chapter, but it has been a long time. I'm enjoying re-reading.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tricks And Traps - Part Three" from VillageOrchid
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Although part of my comment is from the prior two chapters - continuing to enjoy contained but aggressive Giles as you are dramatizing him. In this chapter's cliffhanger, you did something in character for Buffy in cannon which is to take responsibility to make a kill while at the same time underestimating what her allies could also do.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Watchers And Ceremonies - Part Two" from VillageOrchid
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I was going to comment how much I was enjoying the extra time you're spending on Giles as a character, and they upped the stakes with your lovely portrait of "Horry" and fine Faith POV stuff. I still don't care much for the WRH characters, but we do need to follow some of what they're working on. It's hard to see the Charmed characters in the same world as the Buffy-verse characters, but since they are also in the same world as SG1, then Charmed type magic mixes more gently with Nox type magic.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking For A Demon - Part Two" from VillageOrchid
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I had forgotten this twist or didn't read this far. Exciting and scary.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Four" from VillageOrchid
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While this section of the story is an exercise in military strategy (as much of what we see isn't from Cordelia's POV) you have an excellent mix of the Stargate characters in here, and extra Giles POV is always a bonus as far as I'm concerned. I guess if you follow Jack's reasoning from the show, the reality that you're in is the real one for you and that's how everyone is treating it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plumbing The Depths Of LA - Part Two" from VillageOrchid
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Love this bit with Lorne.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Battles Won - Part Two" from VillageOrchid
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Again with the subtlety here with the interpersonal dynamic. Xander is an ally and not an adversary to Buffy.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Price of Winning" from VillageOrchid
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Again, on this re-read I'm going to compliment your subtly here. Magic, at least dimensional hellmouth magic feels differently than the power of the force, yet darkness from the hellmouth influences psychology and power. It is fricken amazing that Xander has been able to access positive energy in Sunnydale. It is a part of life energy and may or may not be linked to magic or the divine.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jedi Harris" from VillageOrchid
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It literally has been years since I read this chapter. I love the minimalist structure where you show a few things that are the same, but only to keep the flow going on what is different. Also the part about Ethan not realizing that Ripper was a watcher to an active slayer. And liking the small differences in Buffy's background.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Six" from Harry
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Well, that is one way to stop Xander and the Wishverse. We now return you to your normal universe.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Five" from Harry
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Better to be safe than sorry Jake. Especially when one is dealing with a teenager who is now a Sith Lord, and trying to take over first the earth, then the galaxy! And Xander KNOWS that there are intruders in the building. ITS SHOWTIME PEOPLE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Four" from Harry
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If and when Cordy gets back to her universe, a talk with Xander is first and foremost on her agenda. Forget the Cordettes (Sheep) forget Giles, go STRAIGHT TO XANDER! Tell him what you saw in that universe, and give him the encouragement he needs to keep getting better!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Three" from Harry
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Looks like SG1 is getting experience on what is going on in Sunnydale THE HARD WAY! Hopefully, they can find a way to end this mad dimension and soon!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part Two" from Harry
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Harris wants to start making CLONES? This is not good news! And a dot on Giles face? LASER TARGET!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alternate Sunnydale - Part One" from Harry
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*Takes a VERY big GULP!* This chapter starts explaining a LOT of another story that I have been reading on the site. Xander Harris as a SITH! This takes it BELOW DEFCON 1! This is bad, VERY BAD!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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