Review of chapter "The Search - Part Two" from Dragonelf
...pointed to the eastern horizon...
Shouldn't it be the western horizon Doyle's points toward when indicating Los Angeles position at the western horizon, especially when he is in a desert east of Los Angeles?
::Continues rereading the story::
Insanity is often the logic of an accurate mind over-tasked.
- Oliver Wendell Holmes
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [28 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gambits - Part Four" from SpacedCadet
I am really enjoying this series, and I'm glad you wrote more, but I have one minor nit:
When Xander was looking for a proper gem to make his lightsaber, it was specified he needed a hard stone, such as a sapphire. In this chapter, you have Oz planning on using an emerald for his lightsaber...but emeralds are soft, and jewelers need to take care to keep harder stones (such as sapphires) from damaging them.
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from DeepBlueJoy
You write like someone who does it for a living -- and does it well. You finally wrenched my precious ten out of me... This story is like the really good book you can't put down... You can't put it down.
This is frighteningly good. I've spent my life around great writers and their writing. This rates.
PS. I can't wait to finish this and read the next story. I haven't had this kind of reaction to a piece of writing since I read J K Rowling's last... I should be studying for my chemistry final... Sigh.
To the other would be writers: this is good writing... Try to measure up. Use the right words, use them correctly, spell them right, use economy but thoroughness in your descriptions and character development. Oh, and come up with a fascinating plot that doesn't jump around, peter out, or bore. Use existing episodes as flavoring, rather than doing the lazy rewrite.
Scribbler: I hope someone somewhere is paying you real money to write. You are that good. And I don't do flattery.
Most of the stuff I read I don't even bother reviewing because I'd have to give them a 2 or a 1... I only review those that aren't a lost cause. You're the opposite. Man, this praise thing is hard. It's hard not to sound maudlin and sentimental and still give high praise. Oh well... this is the best I can do on short notice.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from stasa
Great story, I really liked the Obi-One Xander. Loved the way you've managed to changed things, that seam small, and yet have such an impact.
The wish-universe was awesome! I didn't see that coming, especially Darth Xander.
You did good with all the characters, and I loved you bringing Doyle into the plot early, and the way you've managed to stop Faith from destroying herself.
All in all, an excellent story!
Review By [stasa
] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Hellharpy
this story is really cool!
i must admit i wasn't a fan of Star Wars/BTVS fanfics but you have won me over!!
you make the characters likable the story intriguing and the plots amazing!!
keep up the good work
Review By [Hellharpy
] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from ordieth
Wow. What a story! Good plot, nice climax, engrossing and suspenseful! Thank you for writing, and continuing!
Review By [ordieth
] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Smokey
Found this little gem the other day, read all 60 chapters in one go. Have to say your a brilliant writer and I'm in love with you too!
Beautiful work Scribbler simply beautiful.
Loved the way you developed Xander properly into a Jedi night, loved the way you had him settling down the Slayer (Buffy first) getting her to think things through before going all half cocked.
And I'm so happy that you saved Faith from ripping her heart and soul out from underneath her. I've always suspected that Faith turned away from the Scoobies since they largely basically shoved her aside forcing Buffy to make all the decisions (besides the fact that's how the writers wrote the bleeding series in the first place!), her story or back story ran so close to Vader's story also.
Read the follow up, nearly shrieked seeing you save Lindsey from W&H nastiness!
And since its my birthday I'm going to sit back and relax and read your story again!
Review By [Smokey
] • Date [18 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from draconin
Very enjoyable. I particularly liked your vision of the Sith wishverse.
Review By [draconin
] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Price of Winning" from Archer
The formatting is weird - most line breaks are eliminated. Please fix ASAP so I can read this great fic again!
Review By [Archer
] • Date [24 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from lorwen
This story is great. It captured my interest and wouldn't let go. I usually don't like Star Wars cross overs but I can Highly recommend this one. :)
Review By [lorwen
] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Dragonhulk
Just rereading this and I can't believe that I forgot that the big T was a Star Wars fan. It'll be fun to see him geek out a bit (well however much he shows any emotion) when he sees Xander's lightsaber.
Review By [Dragonhulk
] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from James
I think my favorite scene is at the end of the scene where all the demons and vamipers are mindlessly chasing our heroes and then the spell is broken and one of the vampires decides that they should attack. You painted a wonderful mental picture of all the characters in 'bring it on' mode.
Review By [James
] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from halfbloodpuffskin
...simply amazing. I will be following you and the continued story of Jedi Harris...pretty much forever.
Review By [halfbloodpuffskin
] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Decisions - Part Three" from Dragonelf
Great Story! I will start reading the sequel soon.
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gambits - Part Four" from ReflectionsOfReality
This is at least the fourth time I've read this story (I do keep up to date with the the sequel) and I wanted to know if their was a source for the Karren Box/Gem or if this was your own creation. Every time I have read it I keep on getting flashes of a present for Maggie Walsh's desk. On the one hand I can actually see her using it to coral(sp?) the demons into some sort of hightech padock on the other hand I can see her intigrating it into ADAM on the third (and ain't I a regular Vishnu) I can just imagine the carnage.
Great story, love the info in response but not really demanding it
PS I think Anya needs to have a discussion about reciprocal worlds or something (IE worlds that are closer related than others) to explain why wishing Buffy never turning up equals Darth Xander instead of Vamp Xander (because I think WishVerse Vamp Xander was turned well before Halloween) like she could have only shifted worlds by minor fraction of degrees versus complete alternate realities
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality
] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]