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Slayer of the Dead

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Review of chapter "Dawn of the Dead" from KnightOwl
Review:
This story is pretty good so far. I really like the way you write Buffy. I can just picture her in her leather with the swords strapped to her back and riding the motorcycle. I was panicked with Buffy when the zombie in the office attacked her and she was thinking she was going to turn into one. I can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Well you'll have to wait a bit :) Though hopefully not six months this time... :o Actually getting 7 reviews within 12 hours is a bit inspiring and I've already written 4200 words into the next chapter. That's about half way through the chapter. This said there's surprisingly little action in the next part given her destination... not that this is intentional, its just working out that way.


:: adendum ::

scratch that. There might be a bit of action in the chapter all. Buffy did something potentially fatal. Don't blame me, blame her, if I was in the driver's seat she'd be far more cautious.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of the Dead" from Oranda
Review:
Wow. I just found this story and I have to say that I'm hooked. I don't really like zombie movies and have pretty much refused to see Dawn of the Dead, but like this one. I hope that Angel's still kicking. Can't wait for the next post.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn of the Dead" from gleeky
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LOVED IT, I hope Faith is alive, and they should meet up some how, 2 slayers is better than one.
Review By [gleeky] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn of the Dead" from grd
Review:
Outstanding! Loved the fact that she wore any kind of armor. Too many zombie movies show the humans stupidly without. A cycle is the best ride for a Slayer. Great gas mileage and her strength can be used to her advantage. She can get into areas that a car would find inaccessible. A great zombie story has finally intelligent survivors. Hope she finds others with the same thinking. The easiest armor to acquire is leather. Loving her near panic and relief. Hope Giles can manage some mystical wards too. Looking forward to more!
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from vargamor
Review:
Okay, okay, you've had more than enough time to work on the next chapter. Hustle on now and post an update =). This story is great! You have got the Scoobies down pat, loved the Willow babble and Xander not taking his eyes off the Simpsons..classic Scooby stuff.

I hope you haven't ditched this story, because it's pretty good.
Comments from author:
There you go... updates :) I hadn't actually looked at the story in ages so I appreciate the kick in the butt. I've actually just now finished Chapter 5 and I'm letting it sit for a little bit. (It still needs some editing.)

The current title for Chapter 5 is : Short, Slain, and Sadly Sober. I don't think It'll change at this point. It's a little shorter than I intended at 4.5k and there's not much action in this chapter but it amused me while I was writing it. I figure that's a good sign.
Review By [vargamor] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from AnthonyR2
Review:
good story, you should continue it. and its drmons, not daemons.
Comments from author:
I assume you meant "demon" not "drmon" :) Daemon with an 'a' is actually a valid alternative spelling. Additionally there's a spelling that uses some wierd 'ae' character which looks like the two individual letters are squished together. I think it may be a greek character but as I know nothing about greek that's more of a guess.
Review By [AnthonyR2] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from Shadowcub
Review:
Forget the mall you need a Super Wal Mart type mall with everything and lots of weapons.
Review By [Shadowcub] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from Shadowcub
Review:
Love Buffy and zombies, lots more chapters!
Review By [Shadowcub] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
"What do you mean you think?" Willow whined. "I mean, it’s fairly difficult to mix those kinds of things up isn't it? All the beginning parts are kind of mixxy but the end of the world is like a big cliff you're about to fall off of. You have to be blind not to see it. Unless you’re like the Coyote and you see it but the road runner did something really clever with some paint and it doesn’t really look like a cliff anymore…"

Wow. Just wow. Excellent piece of Willow-babble.

Awesome story. Thank you for making it high quality.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, isn't this the cheeriest little story I've ever read? Lol! Nice job with everyones' characters. I especially like your Anya. I have the feeling there is no happy ending for this story as the dark feeling of doom is quite palatable. Dang, poor Cordy, what a way to go. Or maybe her dying quickly was a blessing. I'm sure the Scoobies will go out fighting, but I really think they need to get out of town. Hey! How about getting to a mall? Lol! Please update quickly, your story has real possibilities. But what about Faith? She was in the hospital, is she now a superzombie?
Comments from author:
It will probably be at least a couple of days. The next chapter is already written and is currently just under 5k words but I'm going to let it sit and then read it again, at which point I'll probably want to edit a few things. The chapter after that only has 800 words so far and I'm not sure if I'll keep any of them :o

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Anya's fun to write but I'm afraid we won't see much of her for the next little while as Buffy sets off on her trip alone leaving all the scoobies to their own devices.

And there will definitly be a mall... one that will even have some familiar faces in it.

Someone asked me about Faith in a private review as well :) For clarification this takes places after the end of the fourth season . At this point Faith was in prison, not the hospital. Her fate after that is still undecided. There's also no sign of Dawn... and there won't be. Glory died unexpectedly when Ben got too close to one of the patients he was treating and had his throat tragically ripped out. Not that Glory didn't realize something very bad was coming but when they trapped her in the buffyverse dimension they trapped her very thoroughly. Nothing short of the Key used at the right time was going to let her go anyplace.

Thanks for the review :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from grd
Review:
Excellent story. I am soooo glad someone finally got smart and wore...armor! More of Buffy going medieval please. Perhaps a nice two handed sword in each hand would be really impressive, or katanas. How are vamps effected by the zombie's? Thank you for having smart heroes.
Comments from author:
:: blinks :: I already gave her three foot long bladed demonic bastard swords (appropriate for both one and two handed use... basically a long sword with an over sized handle) with 6 inch spikes hidden in the handles :o They so kick the hind end of a katana.

But Ok... so I admit she hasn't needed to use them both at once... yet. Don't worry, It'll come
Review By [grd] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Expected Unexpected Apocalypse" from angrymonkey
Review:
I've always wondered WWBD in case of world wide zombie attacs, hope to find out, are they going to try and hide in the desert, or maybe find a well baracaded mall? Hope to see more of the story soon.
Comments from author:
No deserts. Dry... boring... and hot... definitly no fun. I can however guarantee the appearance of a mall... perhaps even the crossroads mall. So maybe it was in a different state in the movie but, really, did its location have any impact at all on the storyline?
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rude Awakenings" from banner
Review:
Wonderful first chapter - intense and interesting.

This is gonna be good, but we better get Faith.
Review By [banner] • Date [20 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rude Awakenings" from Antonio
Review:
Very interesting and really good charecterization.
By the way: shouldn´t you to put a "character dead" warning?
Review By [Antonio] • Date [20 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rude Awakenings" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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Wow! New xover for me. very interested in how this will play.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [20 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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