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Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from konniemacian
Review:
more soon please i'm realy enjoying this
Review By [konniemacian] • Date [1 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from (Site Founder)Jinni
Review:
Please fix spelling error in the summary of the story.
Comments from author:
Fixed this one too.
Review By [(Site Founder)Jinni] • Date [24 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 "Knight of Misfortune"" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Good work and an interesting read. Poor Kendra - crappy life, crappy death in both the series and this AU... I really don't like the PTB.
Comments from author:
Me either. They'll get what they deserve in the end though.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [24 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 "Knight and Day"" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is an outstanding start to a very neat story. As cool as SuperXander is, I worry about Kendra. I really would like to see her not killed. And what about Cordy? Did the bite of JoJo the Dog-Faced Demon effect her in any way? I hope you update this story as I think it has great potential.
Comments from author:
I am sorry about that, and do appologise.

When I decided to try and expand the one-shot YAHF into a fuller length story, Kendra was unfortunatly the Big Bad my muse insisted on, and one created inadvertantly by his own actions. (leaving her in a graveyard after a fight.)

That said, I haven't been able to WRITE it in almost 6 months. I finally gave p and deliberatly skipped past ALL the plot I had, and started way down the road (with Xander escaping Hell) and the story seems to be movingalong quite nicely.

But each time I go back to resume that first Patrol, wherein Kendra shows up for her first fight, as dirrected by the PTB who warned her of the rise of a Powerful and Evil vampire on the hellmouth (which SHE becomes) I just can't do it. Which is why I am posting Knight Errant instead of finishing the first bit of FWK.

As for Codry, i hadn't given any concideration to any after-effects of the bite from Jo-Jo. I jad decided Jo-Jo was a sasquatch like demon, as opposed to a posessed-costume person, and never conciderred a were-anything, so there shouldn't be any after-effects, other than trauma.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 "Knight and Day"" from Kirallie
Review:
great story!!! Love it!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 "Knight and Day"" from tohonomike
Review:
Gosh that was fun, and odd in that I read the first part yesterday, I think. It must mean you are destined to add more chapters to this story :)
Comments from author:
Well if one of my favorite authors says I must go on, then I suppose I must. After all, who am I to thwart destiny?
Review By [tohonomike] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 "Knight and Day"" from Thewander
Review:
Very good, hope for a fast update
Review By [Thewander] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 "Knight and Day"" from Ladeia
Review:
Oh darn those stupid ptb. I hope they are able to talk Kendra out of going after Xander. Xander probably wouldn't be very happy to have to kill her.

Hmm... Now Xander can kick Angel's a** on a regular basis instead of just wishing to.

Hurry back with more soon.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 "Knight and Day"" from xon
Review:
Fascinating...and it's about damn time.
Review By [xon] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
This was really well done! I hope you are planning to write more on it.

James
Comments from author:
Ask and ye shall recieve.

Moersoe, there is another story I have been banging out which is derived from this, which takes place about a year (or perhaps twenty years) later, or maybe a few years before(depending on the perspective) but which certianly follows thisstory with about 3 or 4 unwritten parts set inbetween....

Perhaps I shall post it here as well, if anyone is interested.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [9 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from Bill
Review:
Like this a lot! Very well done.
Review By [Bill] • Date [24 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from Darklight
Review:
Great start, liked it, get more chapters out soon
Review By [Darklight] • Date [24 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from Kirallie
Review:
Great start! Hope there's more soon!! Hope the guy that dressed as Lacroix is okay.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [24 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from GeroRRA
Review:
I thought this was a really great story, and I love Forever Knight.

The way you used Janus (sp?) was awesome. You actually made him sound alive instead of just... _something_ out there.

How will Buffy and the others react to Xander now? She won't try and stake him right? And since he suggested to her to call herself 'Slayer Extrodanare (sp?)' will she know new things too? That'd be kinda cool.

I really hope we see more!


~Welcome to Professor Windlenot’s Museum of the Strange and Unusual.~
Review By [GeroRRA] • Date [24 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from KailBlade
Review:
I'd diffently read more.
Review By [KailBlade] • Date [24 Jul 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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