Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from NotAGoauld
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Wow! Now this is a story that that I really like. The plot is unique andintrigueing. The only problem I see with this, is that the scene transitions were a little bit stiff. It's almost as if it is wrtten like a television show. I sincerely hope you are planning on continueing this as a series. Thanks for shareing this wonderful story.
Review By [NotAGoauld] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from PhilH
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I really liked this story, a it wasn't just the usual new-costume-gets-powers thing. But I also really liked the fact that this is the first time I can recall reading that Janus actually took a deliberate hand in things to have Xander *keep* his changes. Nice touch that. Now of course I'm ready for more! Soon please!
Phil
Review By [PhilH] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from VillageOrchid
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Oooooh. I think I liked this. If you have some new plot directions or fresh interpretations of plot eleements from the series, I'd like to see what's next.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forever White Knight - "Helloween Knight"" from banner
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Wow. What a set of concepts. Janus would certainly find Alexander intriguing. I hope you continue this story.