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Review of chapter "Water" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Oh man please don't stop this story here!!! Pretty please?

I understand if have stopped it however I found the topic very interesting and up to your normal high writing standards.

Thank you for sharing.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Water" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yes! Love it. Cries out for a sequel, don't you think?

*tries to look hopeful but not too pushy, while applying subtle pressure on the author to add more Alan/Buffy yumminess.*
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Water" from ranlynn
Review:
The End??? No no no. Come on, this is just a tease. We want to see Buffy & Alan actuall get together.

Pretty please?
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Water" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Awww! surely not the end? Well it was sweet while it lasted.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Water" from JenC
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Yay, he noticed. Sometimes I wish it could be as easy as two people interested in each other. Then all the baggage has to drop in. sigh
Review By [JenC] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Water" from (Recent Donor)Smurfette
Review:
Nice! I have to admit I haven't read any of the JP crossovers out there, but this being by you I decided to click on the link this time. Am very glad I did, even if I had to struggle through my memory about who the JP characters are -- it's been a good long while since I last watched any of the JP films and I think I've only seen JPIII once. You'll make me go back and watch them again you will! I did like it, and thought the Dawn bit was a nice touch, too.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Smurfette] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Water" from Kalliope
Review:
Thanks to IMDb I found out who Dr. Alan is... the whole Jurassic thing somehow slipped by me, but now I guess I'll get them at the library. Sam Neil, hmmm. Yup, that works.

As always, perfectly written spotlights that leave an overall good feeling and a strange hankering for more...
Review By [Kalliope] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Water" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Wonderfully thought out and put together seamlessly, as I've noticed most of your work is. Thank you for sharing.
Ava
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Water" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Aggg...Erg...RATS! This is the last one (unless you do the final element of Spirit). :-( I really loved how you had Buffy taking in Alan's joy at the beginning, then him noticing the world-weary look in her face at the end. A perfect way to close the circle, though I would certainly love to read more if you wrote it!

Thanks for sharing. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Air" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
*gigglesnort* And another one bites the dust!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Air" from Neviditelny
Review:
It's pretty interesting, but I have one complaint, and for me, it's a major one. You mentioned in your summary that it's an archaeological dig. If it's a 'Jurassic Park' crossover, it's NOT an archaeological dig. We (archaeologists) don't dig up dinosaurs. Dr. Alan Grant digs up dinosaurs. Therefore, he is a paleontologist, and it's a paleontological dig. Archaeologists deal with studying past humans and cultures through their biological and cultural remains. Archaeologists get the whole, "So you dig up dinosaurs, right?" question a lot, and it's the most annoying thing ever, and kind of insulting. So, fo accuracy's sake, you might want to change it to 'paleontological.'
Comments from author:
Not that Buffy would, y'know, have any idea that there's a difference. =)

But I take your point about the summary probably needing to be more accurate; *she* might call it an archaeological dig, but people glancing at a story summary will think of it from their point of view, not hers. Thanks for the input; I'll correct it.
Review By [Neviditelny] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Air" from JenC
Review:
I never thought I would see tis one so soon. I can't wait to see who the next POV will be. Ummm... there will be another right?
Review By [JenC] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Air" from RevDorothyL
Review:
This is adorable! I never would've thought of pairing Eric with Dawn, much less Buffy with Alan Grant (although, as played by Sam Neill, who could resist? Especially if he's re-discovered his bliss?), but this totally works for me! Please tell me there's more on the way, even after you get done with "Water"? This is too tantalizing, at 4 X 200 words.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I am really enjoying this drabble series. I can so see Buffy with Alan. Very cute.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire" from JenC
Review:
WooHoo! I really wish someone would do a long story about these two. I really like this.
Review By [JenC] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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