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Review of chapter "Water" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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Aggg...Erg...RATS! This is the last one (unless you do the final element of Spirit). :-( I really loved how you had Buffy taking in Alan's joy at the beginning, then him noticing the world-weary look in her face at the end. A perfect way to close the circle, though I would certainly love to read more if you wrote it!

Thanks for sharing. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Air" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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*gigglesnort* And another one bites the dust!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Air" from Neviditelny
Review:
It's pretty interesting, but I have one complaint, and for me, it's a major one. You mentioned in your summary that it's an archaeological dig. If it's a 'Jurassic Park' crossover, it's NOT an archaeological dig. We (archaeologists) don't dig up dinosaurs. Dr. Alan Grant digs up dinosaurs. Therefore, he is a paleontologist, and it's a paleontological dig. Archaeologists deal with studying past humans and cultures through their biological and cultural remains. Archaeologists get the whole, "So you dig up dinosaurs, right?" question a lot, and it's the most annoying thing ever, and kind of insulting. So, fo accuracy's sake, you might want to change it to 'paleontological.'
Comments from author:
Not that Buffy would, y'know, have any idea that there's a difference. =)

But I take your point about the summary probably needing to be more accurate; *she* might call it an archaeological dig, but people glancing at a story summary will think of it from their point of view, not hers. Thanks for the input; I'll correct it.
Review By [Neviditelny] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Air" from JenC
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I never thought I would see tis one so soon. I can't wait to see who the next POV will be. Ummm... there will be another right?
Review By [JenC] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Air" from RevDorothyL
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This is adorable! I never would've thought of pairing Eric with Dawn, much less Buffy with Alan Grant (although, as played by Sam Neill, who could resist? Especially if he's re-discovered his bliss?), but this totally works for me! Please tell me there's more on the way, even after you get done with "Water"? This is too tantalizing, at 4 X 200 words.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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I am really enjoying this drabble series. I can so see Buffy with Alan. Very cute.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire" from JenC
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WooHoo! I really wish someone would do a long story about these two. I really like this.
Review By [JenC] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Earth" from JenC
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I can honestly say that this is a pairing that I never saw coming. However, I can totally get behind the Gilesy feel of Alan. I have always liked his character. My first reaction to reading this story was to say 'Aww'. It made me feel good to see Buffy seeing joy. Maybe she can capture a little of it for herself. Thanks for writing this.

Jen
Review By [JenC] • Date [14 Aug 05] • Not Rated
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